Comments received on poems by Justsomegeeze



A past affliction
ShadedSorrow said:

Interesting, it sounds a lot like every dang relationship I've been in.

September 17th, 2016 14:37

Unrequited #05 (untitled)
Augustus said:

Nice.

September 16th, 2016 11:48

Small comforts
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 13th, 2016 12:09

Unrequited #02 (the big lie)
lysistrata said:

Geeze!!
You seem interesting....
And that is NOT a lie?!😮😏

September 13th, 2016 09:17

BLVCK
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

That was very interesting and I get you totally...simple and to the point..check your typo on the title..I though I was about to read a rap song or somethin...lol..great job otherwise!!!

July 26th, 2016 15:16

Unrequited #02 (the big lie)
AAA said:

i love this!!!

July 25th, 2016 18:28

Unrequited #02 (the big lie)
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write

July 25th, 2016 13:12

Unrequited #01 (the exception)
Justsomegeeze said:

R, It's recurrent at the moment! Thanks for the comments though, obviously I can personally relate to your piece but it's eloquent and beautiful nonetheless.

July 23rd, 2016 10:48

Unrequited #01 (the exception)
rrodriguez said:

J, I was feeling that way when I wrote
Unrequited Love. Beautiful poem and well written.

July 23rd, 2016 10:06

Privilege
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks JSG ~ for a nicely structured poem ~ love rhyming couplets. The subject exposes the Patriarchal Societies in which most of us live ! In the UK we have a Queen (64 years) and now a Female Prime Minister. However Females still earn less than Males for a similar job and most top jobs are influenced by Old Boy networks and not Old Girls. In a sense because biologically Ladies have to carry (for 9 critical months) the next generation ~ which Men order ~ their career paths are interrupted if they (and their partner) want to start a Family. Alas we live in a very unequal World. I for one support Ladies and always appoint them of they are the most appropriate candidate. Females make up more than 50% of the population and this should be reflected in Society ~ Yours BRIAN.

July 21st, 2016 18:04

The unknown
Tony36 said:

Great write

July 20th, 2016 06:40

ily
Rosethebrokenhearted said:

It's sweet and simple.

A million emotions in such little words. A job well done!
-RTBH

July 20th, 2016 04:08