Comments received on poems by Justsomegeeze
A past affliction
ShadedSorrow said:
Interesting, it sounds a lot like every dang relationship I've been in.
September 17th, 2016 14:37
ShadedSorrow said:
Interesting, it sounds a lot like every dang relationship I've been in.
September 17th, 2016 14:37
Unrequited #02 (the big lie)
lysistrata said:
Geeze!!
You seem interesting....
And that is NOT a lie?!😮😏
September 13th, 2016 09:17
lysistrata said:
Geeze!!
You seem interesting....
And that is NOT a lie?!😮😏
September 13th, 2016 09:17
BLVCK
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
That was very interesting and I get you totally...simple and to the point..check your typo on the title..I though I was about to read a rap song or somethin...lol..great job otherwise!!!
July 26th, 2016 15:16
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
That was very interesting and I get you totally...simple and to the point..check your typo on the title..I though I was about to read a rap song or somethin...lol..great job otherwise!!!
July 26th, 2016 15:16
Unrequited #01 (the exception)
Justsomegeeze said:
R, It's recurrent at the moment! Thanks for the comments though, obviously I can personally relate to your piece but it's eloquent and beautiful nonetheless.
July 23rd, 2016 10:48
Justsomegeeze said:
R, It's recurrent at the moment! Thanks for the comments though, obviously I can personally relate to your piece but it's eloquent and beautiful nonetheless.
July 23rd, 2016 10:48
Unrequited #01 (the exception)
rrodriguez said:
J, I was feeling that way when I wrote
Unrequited Love. Beautiful poem and well written.
July 23rd, 2016 10:06
rrodriguez said:
J, I was feeling that way when I wrote
Unrequited Love. Beautiful poem and well written.
July 23rd, 2016 10:06
Privilege
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks JSG ~ for a nicely structured poem ~ love rhyming couplets. The subject exposes the Patriarchal Societies in which most of us live ! In the UK we have a Queen (64 years) and now a Female Prime Minister. However Females still earn less than Males for a similar job and most top jobs are influenced by Old Boy networks and not Old Girls. In a sense because biologically Ladies have to carry (for 9 critical months) the next generation ~ which Men order ~ their career paths are interrupted if they (and their partner) want to start a Family. Alas we live in a very unequal World. I for one support Ladies and always appoint them of they are the most appropriate candidate. Females make up more than 50% of the population and this should be reflected in Society ~ Yours BRIAN.
July 21st, 2016 18:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks JSG ~ for a nicely structured poem ~ love rhyming couplets. The subject exposes the Patriarchal Societies in which most of us live ! In the UK we have a Queen (64 years) and now a Female Prime Minister. However Females still earn less than Males for a similar job and most top jobs are influenced by Old Boy networks and not Old Girls. In a sense because biologically Ladies have to carry (for 9 critical months) the next generation ~ which Men order ~ their career paths are interrupted if they (and their partner) want to start a Family. Alas we live in a very unequal World. I for one support Ladies and always appoint them of they are the most appropriate candidate. Females make up more than 50% of the population and this should be reflected in Society ~ Yours BRIAN.
July 21st, 2016 18:04
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Rosethebrokenhearted said:
It's sweet and simple.
A million emotions in such little words. A job well done!
-RTBH
July 20th, 2016 04:08
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
It's sweet and simple.
A million emotions in such little words. A job well done!
-RTBH
July 20th, 2016 04:08
