Comments received on poems by BlitzClank
Broken And Shattered
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BC ~ Thanks for a very poignant and personal first poem. Love your slimline poetic form. It is free verse but pulsates with rhythm making it a compelling read ! One long heart broken unpunctuated sentence a massive "cri de coeur". That is how modern poetry should be written. I'm old enough (33) to have experienced rejection from one I cherished dearly. I would like to tell you ~ you get over it ~ but you don't. Best wishes ~ Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN.
July 20th, 2016 08:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BC ~ Thanks for a very poignant and personal first poem. Love your slimline poetic form. It is free verse but pulsates with rhythm making it a compelling read ! One long heart broken unpunctuated sentence a massive "cri de coeur". That is how modern poetry should be written. I'm old enough (33) to have experienced rejection from one I cherished dearly. I would like to tell you ~ you get over it ~ but you don't. Best wishes ~ Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN.
July 20th, 2016 08:03
