Arrival of the night
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME THOL ~ Thanks for your first poem. It is very well written six neat quatrains pulsating with rhyme and rhythm. The structure suits the subject ~ progressive loss of love and your lover. It is something we all experience as we move through life and love. Writing (and reading) about it is cathartic and I hope you found it so. Your final stanza mirrors my experience.Arrival of the night ~ slowly i cry ~ secretly I die ~ take yourself away ~ I'm broken by the dark. Every blessing ~ thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN

July 22nd, 2016 05:14