Do You Remember That One Night?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME AMARAM ~ Thanks for your great first poem. The repetition of ~ I DO ~ gives the poem structure and flow leading to the ultimate I DON'T which effectively closes the form. The subject complements the structure "Unrequited Love" culminating in DEATH ! Thanks for sharing ~ awesome. BRIAN

July 25th, 2016 15:00

Do You Remember That One Night?
thebettersideofme69 said:

Great write !

July 25th, 2016 00:09