Comments received on poems by kind.adolescent
Mask
Mads said:
I feel the same exact way... I've always faked a smile and people think I'm happy.
August 29th, 2016 16:00
Mads said:
I feel the same exact way... I've always faked a smile and people think I'm happy.
August 29th, 2016 16:00
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daniel dawes said:
Being positive about your situation is a good way to bring about positivity. Thanks for sharing.
August 28th, 2016 04:22
daniel dawes said:
Being positive about your situation is a good way to bring about positivity. Thanks for sharing.
August 28th, 2016 04:22
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Tony36 said:
Great write, leave the past in the past, concentrate upon the here and now, the future is not worth a mind's though either
August 27th, 2016 17:25
Tony36 said:
Great write, leave the past in the past, concentrate upon the here and now, the future is not worth a mind's though either
August 27th, 2016 17:25
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI KA ~ Last year ~ past year ~ send it off with a blast Dear ! Next year ~ best year ~ better than the rest Dear ~ Help you forget the past Dear ~ get it right your future's BRIGHT. Thanks for sharing love you and your optimism ~ A NEW PERSPECTIVE ~ Your Friend BRIAN
August 27th, 2016 14:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI KA ~ Last year ~ past year ~ send it off with a blast Dear ! Next year ~ best year ~ better than the rest Dear ~ Help you forget the past Dear ~ get it right your future's BRIGHT. Thanks for sharing love you and your optimism ~ A NEW PERSPECTIVE ~ Your Friend BRIAN
August 27th, 2016 14:11
Broken hearts
thatsilentgirl said:
So true. I think this is the best poem you've written so far
August 18th, 2016 01:22
thatsilentgirl said:
So true. I think this is the best poem you've written so far
August 18th, 2016 01:22
I miss you.
thatsilentgirl said:
Its a great poem with a good subject. I love how deep it went. You did an amazing job!
August 18th, 2016 01:19
thatsilentgirl said:
Its a great poem with a good subject. I love how deep it went. You did an amazing job!
August 18th, 2016 01:19
I miss you.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HOLA KA ~ Love the title in Portuguese SAUDADE sounds so so sad and lonely. The Hispanic languages are so so beautiful. The penultimate line "I feel like something is missing" encapsulates all the pathos and longing in this beautiful poem ~ I can empathise ~Yours BRIAN
August 17th, 2016 14:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HOLA KA ~ Love the title in Portuguese SAUDADE sounds so so sad and lonely. The Hispanic languages are so so beautiful. The penultimate line "I feel like something is missing" encapsulates all the pathos and longing in this beautiful poem ~ I can empathise ~Yours BRIAN
August 17th, 2016 14:29
Broken hearts
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
"Serene beauty pulling you in ~ only to push you away ~ And the fierce wind whispers a serious warning ............. STAY AWAY !"
There are deep and fierce currents in the Ocean and the same istrue of LIFE and LOVE. We must make sure that we NEVER break another persons heart and try to avoid our own being broken ! In my experience people with broken hearts (for whatever reason) are in great agony and pain and revenge can be bitter often leading to injury ~ dearth ~ suicide. Please take good care of your HEART ! Thanks for sharing ~ Your Friend BRIAN
August 16th, 2016 13:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
"Serene beauty pulling you in ~ only to push you away ~ And the fierce wind whispers a serious warning ............. STAY AWAY !"
There are deep and fierce currents in the Ocean and the same istrue of LIFE and LOVE. We must make sure that we NEVER break another persons heart and try to avoid our own being broken ! In my experience people with broken hearts (for whatever reason) are in great agony and pain and revenge can be bitter often leading to injury ~ dearth ~ suicide. Please take good care of your HEART ! Thanks for sharing ~ Your Friend BRIAN
August 16th, 2016 13:37
infatuation
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks KA ~ There are many aspects of Love ~ as you are experiencing ~ which is beautiful ! It starts with puppy love ~ leads on to experiential love ~ then passionate love (which is very exciting} then INFATUATION where everything is possible and nothing is taboo ~ BLISSFUL ! Love is not to be analysed (understood) it is in essence to be enjoyed ~ in a word ~ BLISSFUL. In my experience (and yours) INFATUATION does ebb and flow ~ but when it flows ~ it flows through every fibre of your beings and it is the very best Aspect of Love. Thanks for sharing ~ I enjoyed the poem ~ I could feel the Love ~ I could feel your INFATUATION ! Yours BRIAN.
August 10th, 2016 16:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks KA ~ There are many aspects of Love ~ as you are experiencing ~ which is beautiful ! It starts with puppy love ~ leads on to experiential love ~ then passionate love (which is very exciting} then INFATUATION where everything is possible and nothing is taboo ~ BLISSFUL ! Love is not to be analysed (understood) it is in essence to be enjoyed ~ in a word ~ BLISSFUL. In my experience (and yours) INFATUATION does ebb and flow ~ but when it flows ~ it flows through every fibre of your beings and it is the very best Aspect of Love. Thanks for sharing ~ I enjoyed the poem ~ I could feel the Love ~ I could feel your INFATUATION ! Yours BRIAN.
August 10th, 2016 16:11
Mask
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME KA ~ SMILE ~ when your heart is aching ~ SMILE ~ when it's nearly breaking ~ thing will feel better when you SMILE ! If I see you SMILING ~ I'll give you a HUG ~ If I see you crying I might run off like a bug ! Please don't sit in the corner ~ all gloomy and sad ~ I'll always talk to you if you look glad. So spread some happiness all over the place and put on a HAPPY FACE. Who knows I find when i smile (even when I'm sad inside) GOD brings me a Friend and gives me something to smile about. Thanks for sharing and thanks for being my friend ~ Yours BRIAN
August 6th, 2016 04:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME KA ~ SMILE ~ when your heart is aching ~ SMILE ~ when it's nearly breaking ~ thing will feel better when you SMILE ! If I see you SMILING ~ I'll give you a HUG ~ If I see you crying I might run off like a bug ! Please don't sit in the corner ~ all gloomy and sad ~ I'll always talk to you if you look glad. So spread some happiness all over the place and put on a HAPPY FACE. Who knows I find when i smile (even when I'm sad inside) GOD brings me a Friend and gives me something to smile about. Thanks for sharing and thanks for being my friend ~ Yours BRIAN
August 6th, 2016 04:55
