Comments received on poems by Ejvazquez17
Kamehameha Kiss
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS ELIJAH ~ Lips on Lips is one of the most sensuous aspects of love making ! I guess thsi is an Hawaiian Kiss ? I didn't kiss many Girls in Hawaii but those I did were very special ~ lYours BRIAN Please check my poem ANGELS and my FUSION POEM ~ I LOVE ANGELS ~ Thanks
August 29th, 2016 14:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS ELIJAH ~ Lips on Lips is one of the most sensuous aspects of love making ! I guess thsi is an Hawaiian Kiss ? I didn't kiss many Girls in Hawaii but those I did were very special ~ lYours BRIAN Please check my poem ANGELS and my FUSION POEM ~ I LOVE ANGELS ~ Thanks
August 29th, 2016 14:12
Overplayed Radio Song
lysistrata said:
I was a New Avant Garde
Which due to its quality
Became an Old Classic.🎼🎶
August 28th, 2016 14:05
lysistrata said:
I was a New Avant Garde
Which due to its quality
Became an Old Classic.🎼🎶
August 28th, 2016 14:05
Nyctophillia
lysistrata said:
Nyctophobia 🌚
Requires
Algorithms
Nyctophilia 🌙
Provokes
AlgoRhythms...
August 22nd, 2016 11:12
lysistrata said:
Nyctophobia 🌚
Requires
Algorithms
Nyctophilia 🌙
Provokes
AlgoRhythms...
August 22nd, 2016 11:12
Rubik\'s Heart
Reivax Camlost said:
A good piece of writing- Fast paced, short breath, emotion, clarity.
I like.
August 20th, 2016 10:45
Reivax Camlost said:
A good piece of writing- Fast paced, short breath, emotion, clarity.
I like.
August 20th, 2016 10:45
Rubik\'s Heart
lysistrata said:
Friend,
I have comment to your "Pumpkin" Poem,with just ONE word.
Let your Head turn like a Rubik &
Think much,
Obey little,
Write more...⏳
August 20th, 2016 09:56
lysistrata said:
Friend,
I have comment to your "Pumpkin" Poem,with just ONE word.
Let your Head turn like a Rubik &
Think much,
Obey little,
Write more...⏳
August 20th, 2016 09:56
Rubik\'s Heart
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
All you need VAZ ~ is a bit of lube on the cube ! BRIAN
August 18th, 2016 08:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
All you need VAZ ~ is a bit of lube on the cube ! BRIAN
August 18th, 2016 08:24
Pumpkin Spice Scent
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing VAZ. That's my experience too ~ Love comes ~ Love goes ! You have to make the most of it while it lasts. Enjoy the Pumpkin Pies ~ Hot up with the Spice ~ Remember the Scent for ever. That's the Glory of ~ That's the Story of ~ LOVE ~ BRIAN
August 17th, 2016 17:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing VAZ. That's my experience too ~ Love comes ~ Love goes ! You have to make the most of it while it lasts. Enjoy the Pumpkin Pies ~ Hot up with the Spice ~ Remember the Scent for ever. That's the Glory of ~ That's the Story of ~ LOVE ~ BRIAN
August 17th, 2016 17:44
Dodo
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
Short and simple, and gets to the bigger picture faster. There's not an ounce of this work that I didn't find captivating. Thank you for the read (:
~RTBH
August 16th, 2016 09:24
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
Short and simple, and gets to the bigger picture faster. There's not an ounce of this work that I didn't find captivating. Thank you for the read (:
~RTBH
August 16th, 2016 09:24
Jenga
lysistrata said:
Excellence is an art won by training and habituation.
You rise,You fall 😲
What don't kill you'll make you more strong......💪
(Enjoy Metallica - Broken, Beat & Scarred )
August 15th, 2016 13:29
lysistrata said:
Excellence is an art won by training and habituation.
You rise,You fall 😲
What don't kill you'll make you more strong......💪
(Enjoy Metallica - Broken, Beat & Scarred )
August 15th, 2016 13:29
Deathly Defenestration
lysistrata said:
I got close to nominating this,but needs a bit of work....
Check OUT Verses 2 & 9, correct the typo "lifless" - I am sure you could Find a better Title & you tossed 120 pounds?! How many kilos are these?!💪
But overall 👏👌
August 15th, 2016 03:46
lysistrata said:
I got close to nominating this,but needs a bit of work....
Check OUT Verses 2 & 9, correct the typo "lifless" - I am sure you could Find a better Title & you tossed 120 pounds?! How many kilos are these?!💪
But overall 👏👌
August 15th, 2016 03:46
Deathly Defenestration
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks EJVAZ ~ for a very powerful powerful poem of Love ~ Lust ~ Betrayal. A great warnig to all who would dabble with drugs ~ sex ~ alcohol ~ especially when you are three stories off the ground ! BRIAN
August 11th, 2016 10:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks EJVAZ ~ for a very powerful powerful poem of Love ~ Lust ~ Betrayal. A great warnig to all who would dabble with drugs ~ sex ~ alcohol ~ especially when you are three stories off the ground ! BRIAN
August 11th, 2016 10:33
The Powerball
Ejvazquez17 said:
Such a Shame
Such a Shame
Such a Shame
Because in
The end
No one wins
Life's cruel game
August 10th, 2016 11:02
Ejvazquez17 said:
Such a Shame
Such a Shame
Such a Shame
Because in
The end
No one wins
Life's cruel game
August 10th, 2016 11:02
The Powerball
lysistrata said:
Don't Complain
Don't Complain
Don't Complain
Because at the end
It could be YOU
That I might name ...📢
August 10th, 2016 10:03
lysistrata said:
Don't Complain
Don't Complain
Don't Complain
Because at the end
It could be YOU
That I might name ...📢
August 10th, 2016 10:03
Lava Lamp Love
lysistrata said:
We met
I bloomed
You blew
Our love was out of season.🍃🍂
August 9th, 2016 15:37
lysistrata said:
We met
I bloomed
You blew
Our love was out of season.🍃🍂
August 9th, 2016 15:37
Lava Lamp Love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREAT POEM ELIJAH ~ Wonderful analogy of love and the lava lamp. Depending on the temperature (libido) the globules of oil rise and merge ~ then get too excited and separate never to merge again ! I agree "love is like a lava lamp" Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
August 9th, 2016 14:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREAT POEM ELIJAH ~ Wonderful analogy of love and the lava lamp. Depending on the temperature (libido) the globules of oil rise and merge ~ then get too excited and separate never to merge again ! I agree "love is like a lava lamp" Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
August 9th, 2016 14:00
1/2 Banana
rrodriguez said:
Interesting metaphor. It really conveys a concrete thought about a broken heart. We can relate to a banana because its so mundane. Great job!
August 8th, 2016 08:48
rrodriguez said:
Interesting metaphor. It really conveys a concrete thought about a broken heart. We can relate to a banana because its so mundane. Great job!
August 8th, 2016 08:48
Eta Carinae and All the Rest
lysistrata said:
Or Bruises after Bruises...
This Eta Carinae is a long conversation...🌞 till 🌛⭐
August 8th, 2016 07:39
lysistrata said:
Or Bruises after Bruises...
This Eta Carinae is a long conversation...🌞 till 🌛⭐
August 8th, 2016 07:39
-128.6°F
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks EJVA ~ In human experience you cant get colder than that ~ some frozen heart ! Carbon dioxide freezes at minus 70F ~ so take care breathing out ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
August 5th, 2016 14:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks EJVA ~ In human experience you cant get colder than that ~ some frozen heart ! Carbon dioxide freezes at minus 70F ~ so take care breathing out ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
August 5th, 2016 14:04
