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Daddy\'s Girl by Yours Truly
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 6th, 2016 21:03

Daddy\'s Girl by Yours Truly

-WELCOME SMOKEY EYES ~Thanks for an excellent first poem in both STRUCTURE and SUBJECT. It is in "free verse" but structured in stanzas to make it easier and more interesting to read. The subject is sad but real and it is always the Mothers who are left holding (and consoling) the Babies.! All little Girls love their Daddies and suffer (often silently) when their Daddy desserts them. I'm not married ~ but if i was ~ and a Dad ~ I trust I would not dessert my Wife and Kids for another Family. Sometimes poems like this make me ashamed to be a Man ~ but I try always to be a Gentleman ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN

August 6th, 2016 18:31