Comments received on poems by Kelly



Lonely
gerrylegister said:

The imagery is delightful

January 20th, 2011 21:41

Lonely
Cheeky Missy said:

Pathos excellently depicted poignantly. Loneliness dogging without relief. You aptly captured the problem so many suffer. Does the Lord not hear? Or, are we expecting something He did not promise? I frequently find that to be my case...awaiting what His Word never promised and the answer is right there.....His Word answers us and comforts us but feelings deceive and I never saw He promised good feelings. He said to His people I will never leave thee nor forsake thee...that's a fact, not a feeling. I suspect the deliverance and answer could be nearer than you realize.....as He says, this is my comfort in my affliction, Thy Word hath quickened me. I hope this might be helpful, not otherwise for you...I wish I could comfort you.

January 20th, 2011 16:08

Lonely
dbremner said:

Very nicely written, though very sad. A good poem, to be lonely is quite awfull.

January 20th, 2011 15:45