Comments received on poems by Meghan_star
Dear Daughter
Cy said:
I love the way this poem flows from one line to a next. You have a great writing tone. the questions within the poem also add a level to make readers think and ponder the lines of the poem. Great write
August 22nd, 2016 11:57
Cy said:
I love the way this poem flows from one line to a next. You have a great writing tone. the questions within the poem also add a level to make readers think and ponder the lines of the poem. Great write
August 22nd, 2016 11:57
Dear Daughter
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing MEGHAN ~ most mothers try to control their daughters to save them from MEN ! Mothers are a bit more lenient with their Sons because we don't get pregnant. However my Mum did tell me to be careful and try not to make my Gf's with Child ! I haven't so far and I'm 33 and still single. You are a very beautiful Girl who could co-create a beautiful Daughter or a handsome Son. It grieves me to think such a beautiful scenario may never happen because you don't want to treat your (unborn) daughter like your Mum treats you. My advice would be please please give Life and Love a chance. Thinking of you ~ BRIAN
August 21st, 2016 09:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing MEGHAN ~ most mothers try to control their daughters to save them from MEN ! Mothers are a bit more lenient with their Sons because we don't get pregnant. However my Mum did tell me to be careful and try not to make my Gf's with Child ! I haven't so far and I'm 33 and still single. You are a very beautiful Girl who could co-create a beautiful Daughter or a handsome Son. It grieves me to think such a beautiful scenario may never happen because you don't want to treat your (unborn) daughter like your Mum treats you. My advice would be please please give Life and Love a chance. Thinking of you ~ BRIAN
August 21st, 2016 09:32
Dear Daughter
Akamykowski said:
If your mother is like you, she must be very beautiful. This poem hit very close to home as my mother and I rarely see eye to eye. I question my own morals and I try very hard to be a good person, despite my sometimes troubling thoughts. Now a bit older, I bring myself to be her equal. I'm honest with my feelings and I don't hesitate any longer when it comes to my beliefs. She criticizes me, questions my morality, tries to justify her own behavior in spite of mine. The more you learn about yourself, the more you'll start to understand about her so don't lose hope! Don't stop writing please, I'm looking very forward to hearing more.
August 20th, 2016 21:05
Akamykowski said:
If your mother is like you, she must be very beautiful. This poem hit very close to home as my mother and I rarely see eye to eye. I question my own morals and I try very hard to be a good person, despite my sometimes troubling thoughts. Now a bit older, I bring myself to be her equal. I'm honest with my feelings and I don't hesitate any longer when it comes to my beliefs. She criticizes me, questions my morality, tries to justify her own behavior in spite of mine. The more you learn about yourself, the more you'll start to understand about her so don't lose hope! Don't stop writing please, I'm looking very forward to hearing more.
August 20th, 2016 21:05
The undeniable denied truths
poetic_demise425 said:
Wow!!!! Your work of art is worded so beautifully. The story you tell. It's heart aching moments. The concept of wanting to be a rose. I love it.
August 19th, 2016 21:49
poetic_demise425 said:
Wow!!!! Your work of art is worded so beautifully. The story you tell. It's heart aching moments. The concept of wanting to be a rose. I love it.
August 19th, 2016 21:49
The undeniable denied truths
Tony36 said:
Awesome, Awesome write. Very insightful
August 19th, 2016 07:13
Tony36 said:
Awesome, Awesome write. Very insightful
August 19th, 2016 07:13
The undeniable denied truths
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MEGHAN ~ Thanks for a very challenging first prose poem. We are members of the Animal Kingdom (Fauna) and we operate in harmony (symbiosis) with the Plant Kingdom (Flora). We breath in oxygen (20% of the atmosphere) and breath out carbon dioxide. Plants breath in carbon dioxide (0.035% of the atmosphere) and breath out oxygen. Because of that I see myself at least equal to a dandelion ! I appreciate the message of your poem ~ that Man has been very selfish and destructive to the environment polluting the atmosphere ~ the hydrosphere ~ the lithosphere ~ disgraceful. GHIA fights back and the Earth is becoming less habitable. God willing I will be 100 in 2083 but I shudder to think what the Planet will be like by then. I'm not a DAD but I love "new born babies" and they are perfect ~ fresh out from GOD ! Alas they soon become corrupted by sinful society ~ and as you say less than a WEED ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ I'm still digesting Your BRIAN (UK)
August 19th, 2016 01:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MEGHAN ~ Thanks for a very challenging first prose poem. We are members of the Animal Kingdom (Fauna) and we operate in harmony (symbiosis) with the Plant Kingdom (Flora). We breath in oxygen (20% of the atmosphere) and breath out carbon dioxide. Plants breath in carbon dioxide (0.035% of the atmosphere) and breath out oxygen. Because of that I see myself at least equal to a dandelion ! I appreciate the message of your poem ~ that Man has been very selfish and destructive to the environment polluting the atmosphere ~ the hydrosphere ~ the lithosphere ~ disgraceful. GHIA fights back and the Earth is becoming less habitable. God willing I will be 100 in 2083 but I shudder to think what the Planet will be like by then. I'm not a DAD but I love "new born babies" and they are perfect ~ fresh out from GOD ! Alas they soon become corrupted by sinful society ~ and as you say less than a WEED ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ I'm still digesting Your BRIAN (UK)
August 19th, 2016 01:55
