Comments received on poems by SWD1992
The Perfect Irony
Cheeky Missy said:
This is beautiful. I love how you drew the scene of falling in love with your valentine...from before you met her to finally having her....it is delightfully sweet, romantic and so beautiful. I hope it lasts for ever....glad for you two!
February 12th, 2011 15:42
Cheeky Missy said:
This is beautiful. I love how you drew the scene of falling in love with your valentine...from before you met her to finally having her....it is delightfully sweet, romantic and so beautiful. I hope it lasts for ever....glad for you two!
February 12th, 2011 15:42
The Perfect Irony
erin wynette said:
oh my gosh!!!i can relate to this poem..i remember writing one like this for my bf...nice one dude!!!keep up!!stay inlove!!
February 8th, 2011 12:47
erin wynette said:
oh my gosh!!!i can relate to this poem..i remember writing one like this for my bf...nice one dude!!!keep up!!stay inlove!!
February 8th, 2011 12:47
A Sad Conclusion
SWD1992 said:
thank you very much for the comment.... i meant to say faith as in life itself, something you cannot choose, (god's decision) and gd is good i wrote that by mistake... but thnk u :)
January 22nd, 2011 12:32
SWD1992 said:
thank you very much for the comment.... i meant to say faith as in life itself, something you cannot choose, (god's decision) and gd is good i wrote that by mistake... but thnk u :)
January 22nd, 2011 12:32
A Sad Conclusion
Cheeky Missy said:
Your end-rhyming is excellent and your rhythm fairly good as well. By "faith" do you mean "believing"? Like when friends leave, turning our to be false, deceiving our strong beliefs in them? It is indeed a sad conclusion. And your poem is a fascinating, serious contemplation in the mind of the bereaved/forsaken. You thus capture the feelings, dilemma and attempted solution beautifully. What did you mean by the second line of the third stanza? what does "gd" mean...."God" or "good"? Your poem was very interesting.....I enjoyed it.
January 22nd, 2011 12:25
Cheeky Missy said:
Your end-rhyming is excellent and your rhythm fairly good as well. By "faith" do you mean "believing"? Like when friends leave, turning our to be false, deceiving our strong beliefs in them? It is indeed a sad conclusion. And your poem is a fascinating, serious contemplation in the mind of the bereaved/forsaken. You thus capture the feelings, dilemma and attempted solution beautifully. What did you mean by the second line of the third stanza? what does "gd" mean...."God" or "good"? Your poem was very interesting.....I enjoyed it.
January 22nd, 2011 12:25
