Comments received on poems by EstherActs
Breath
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ESTHER (lovely name) Thanks for your first poem ~ it raps well ~ great genre for performance. I am a performance poet. The content is very powerful and an expression of the contrary relationships we all find ourselves
in. My favorite lines are "I see right through you ~ not just cause I don't like you ~ Maybe cause my cries ~ were drowned out by your screams and sighs" In full flow most Men never heed the cries of their Lady ~ shame ! Thanks for sahrin' great rap ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN.
September 1st, 2016 03:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ESTHER (lovely name) Thanks for your first poem ~ it raps well ~ great genre for performance. I am a performance poet. The content is very powerful and an expression of the contrary relationships we all find ourselves
in. My favorite lines are "I see right through you ~ not just cause I don't like you ~ Maybe cause my cries ~ were drowned out by your screams and sighs" In full flow most Men never heed the cries of their Lady ~ shame ! Thanks for sahrin' great rap ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN.
September 1st, 2016 03:48
