Comments received on poems by daniellemiller7
goodbye
P.X. Vexxus said:
A very sad poem. Death is a release from our pain and hurt. To die with nature is all we can hope for. I really liked this poem.
September 1st, 2016 19:44
P.X. Vexxus said:
A very sad poem. Death is a release from our pain and hurt. To die with nature is all we can hope for. I really liked this poem.
September 1st, 2016 19:44
goodbye
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME DANIELLE (LOVELY NAME) ~ Thanks for your first poem on MPS ~ a bit melancholy but a cool approach to death ! Closing the door ~ sleeping ~ peace at last ~ sinking ship ~ final goodbye. I'm not afraid to die ~ but your perfect poem (quatrains & rhyming couplets) has given me a perfect perspective 1 By the way I am (33) and only one-third through my life (I hope) but we have all got to die some day ! Thanks for sharing more please ~ Yours BRIAN
September 1st, 2016 04:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME DANIELLE (LOVELY NAME) ~ Thanks for your first poem on MPS ~ a bit melancholy but a cool approach to death ! Closing the door ~ sleeping ~ peace at last ~ sinking ship ~ final goodbye. I'm not afraid to die ~ but your perfect poem (quatrains & rhyming couplets) has given me a perfect perspective 1 By the way I am (33) and only one-third through my life (I hope) but we have all got to die some day ! Thanks for sharing more please ~ Yours BRIAN
September 1st, 2016 04:39
goodbye
JohnThomas said:
Danielle,
Very interesting. Beautiful and sad. I hope writing and sharing helps you. Getting out these bad feelings instead of sitting on them.
Welcome to the club 😎
September 1st, 2016 02:38
JohnThomas said:
Danielle,
Very interesting. Beautiful and sad. I hope writing and sharing helps you. Getting out these bad feelings instead of sitting on them.
Welcome to the club 😎
September 1st, 2016 02:38
