Comments received on poems by thelostdaimon
Ode To Opia
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TLD ~ Thanks for a challenging first poem made me think about OPIA ~ The ambiguous intensity of looking someone in the eye which can feel both invasive and vulnerable. Like peering through a (key)hole in the door of a house ~ able to tell there's someone there ~ but unable to tell if you're looking in or out ! Your elegant poem ~ describes that perfectly ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN
September 1st, 2016 18:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TLD ~ Thanks for a challenging first poem made me think about OPIA ~ The ambiguous intensity of looking someone in the eye which can feel both invasive and vulnerable. Like peering through a (key)hole in the door of a house ~ able to tell there's someone there ~ but unable to tell if you're looking in or out ! Your elegant poem ~ describes that perfectly ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN
September 1st, 2016 18:09
