Comments received on poems by Abu Aeesh



My Published Work on Amazon
L. B. Mek said:

Why, must we try to possess and tattoo our meaning
on everything, we claim to appreciate?
Here a fellow Poet, who has shared
some of his brilliant write\'s with us previously
simply celebrates, his wonderful achievement
yes, he is promoting his work
but aren\'t we all, by choosing to post our writes?
It\'s not like he is demanding we buy anything either
merely sharing and celebrating his achievement
while promoting his published status
what\'s the harm, truly?
In some way, isn\'t it Poetic
to see one of our own: make it!
Personally, dear poet
for what\'s it worth, I thank you
for sharing your good news with us
and trusting us
to share in your good fortune...
So happy for you!
Keep striving, growing
and never let anyone discourage your progress!
At the very least you can count on me
downloading the e-book samples of both your books!
Talent like yours deserves
as wide an audience as you can find, so shine bright
even through those stormy clouds of life
and become that torch, to ignite: someone else\'s dream...!

June 17th, 2021 04:05

My Published Work on Amazon
Doggerel Dave said:

Sorry mate good try, but I\'m with Saxon here. Had a sales rep attempting to sell air conditioners here once.....
Hope to see more of your poetry though.
Take care


June 16th, 2021 06:46

My Published Work on Amazon
dusk arising said:

Are any of them readable? What are the sales figures like? Haven\'t seen them being reviewed in the press.

June 16th, 2021 06:43

My Published Work on Amazon
Saxon Crow said:

Dude this isnt a page for selling and advertising

June 16th, 2021 06:28

Pinky Promise, He Insisted
Goldfinch60 said:

Children are so wonderful and so innocent yet they can show us all the way life should be handled.

Andy

June 16th, 2021 00:44

Pinky Promise, He Insisted
Doggerel Dave said:


Subject deep and heavy but with a lightness of touch.
Last stanza: so right in many ways , though I do fear for the kid’s future. Like ‘now trumps later’ – I’ve never heard it expressed in quite that way before.

June 15th, 2021 22:26

Published a Book.
L. B. Mek said:

Congratulations brother!
onwards then to the next, have you started your next one or do you have a few ideas waiting to be actualised/finalised...
Keep that mighty pen flowing

January 19th, 2021 05:47

I\'m Off
L. B. Mek said:

\'Because if I were to ask you to point a finger of where I stand in your proffered label and this box of darkness you won\'t know, and you won\'t care but you\'d tell me I\'m off. That I\'m one word. Right here, right now, I\'m that word and you\'re above it.\'
may you never be discouraged dear Poet, for you word more veracity in one verse than some of us have the opportunity to ink in a lifetime of easily digestible - aesthetically pleasing scribbles,
do you brother! I for one, am undoubtedly a supporter (however pitifully miniscule, that statement may read to most) lol
Happy New Year

January 4th, 2021 05:21

The Year 2020
L. B. Mek said:

keep voicing your truth to dig through realisation\'s trenches, woven upon inviting blank pages,
inking a path to those horizon\'s: excavated a little less bleak, with each choice line of introspective insight, you pen
thanks for sharing, Happy Holidays

December 21st, 2020 05:30

\'Hope,\' I told her
Lorna said:

I adored this....... a whole lifetime in a few short lines......... (and just a note aside..... I read your name and said it aloud just to hear what it sounded like and it sounded like a poem - that is if I was saying it correctly). I hope you finish the story...........

October 12th, 2020 05:33

\'Hope,\' I told her
L. B. Mek said:

firstly, your perfectly chosen picture immediately gifts the reader the perfect mindset to receive your flowing words on unrequited - but not yet surrendered tethers to yearned love, deceptively simple and yet relatable on so many levels,
a wonderful read

October 12th, 2020 04:37

\'Hope,\' I told her
Goldfinch60 said:

Those things still to happen will be wonderful.

Andy

October 12th, 2020 00:43

Beauty not measured
Lorna said:

Absolutely beautiful Abu Aeesh..... your name is also poetic.

February 8th, 2019 06:52

She Will Listen
dusk arising said:

Abu. Those are very important words to every one of us. Your partner will receive them in a way they choose, which may surprise both of you. However, the words do need to be said or they will never know.
I wish you every happiness in this.


August 24th, 2018 05:07

She Will Listen
dusk arising said:

And the words are which?

August 22nd, 2018 01:23

Letter to My Future Wife
Lorna said:

How absolutely beautiful - she will be very lucky..............

July 29th, 2018 05:23

Drumbeat of Rain
Lorna said:

Very nice description Abu..... and I love the picture - where is this?

May 10th, 2018 07:40

Tall Trees
onepauly said:

the breeze in the trees whispers
the sound of country miles.

May 4th, 2018 09:01

Tall Trees
Lorna said:

I just love this Abu............may you never......

May 4th, 2018 05:17

Patch of Light
Lorna said:

Yes it is beautiful!

April 20th, 2018 11:01

Patch of Light
onepauly said:

I have a benign prostate
and I still
don\'t know what it means?

April 20th, 2018 08:44

Pores of Sand
Abu Aeesh said:

Thank you.

April 14th, 2018 14:14

Pores of Sand
Maxine Smith said:

A good write.

April 13th, 2018 15:36

I don\'t love her
Lorna said:

Awwwwww.... you love her!

March 14th, 2018 07:36

Come Peer
Laura🌻 said:

...and choosing I will do!
I will focus on the friends I have never met, but I’ll never forget the ones I have!
Great write for a great read!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts!

October 27th, 2017 05:13

NUTELLA
FredPeyer said:

I love Nutella, grew up with it, and really like your poem. But unfortunately, Nutella is made from sugar, modified palm oil, hazelnuts, cocoa, skimmed milk powder, whey powder, lecithin, and vanillin. Not very healthy. But what the heck, it tastes good!

October 14th, 2017 04:30

The Feet at Her Thin Threshold
Accidental Poet said:

Outstanding write Abu.
\"because no one can enter a contract with time\"- BRILLIANT!!! ; )

September 3rd, 2017 04:34

Symposium: First Encounter
jenny.g said:

Beautiful!

August 1st, 2017 14:58

Her city of words
Goldfinch60 said:

Good loving write, may her words forever be with you.

July 10th, 2017 00:47

Her city of words
onepauly said:

some love story good poem

July 9th, 2017 17:12

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