Truths
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME KATIE ~ Thanks for sharing a very beautiful first poem. Short bu busting with Rhyme Rhythm and Reason ! Life in the 21st C is very restless and dynamic ~ but also with small Oasis of calm. Rhyme make a poem easier to read and recite but the key factor is rhythm. I love your ultimate line ~ "From a time well sinned! ~ so frank ~ it is so true of all because we all sin and fall short of God's Glory, More please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)

September 9th, 2016 01:34