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lovedud said:

A beautiful breath of fresh air in the form of a poem. Loved the way it was worded. Very well done.

September 15th, 2016 21:06

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME EBBS ~ A beautifully crafted first poem in "free verse" but throbbing with rhythm and desire. The theme of your Poem rings a bell with most of us Men ! The Lady of our Dreams ~ adorable but unobtainable ~ one sided LOVE ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please. Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN

September 12th, 2016 14:22

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ebbsmillz said:

Thank you both so much, I really appreciate the feedback.

September 12th, 2016 12:54

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lovedud said:

Beautifully worded and a very passionate poem. Great write!

September 12th, 2016 11:38