Comments received on poems by Bookbag
Infidelity
Whimsical_1 said:
This poem has a very strong message. Also definitely something you could rap or put to music if you're are interested. Thank you so much for sharing, can't wait to read more
October 6th, 2016 21:33
Whimsical_1 said:
This poem has a very strong message. Also definitely something you could rap or put to music if you're are interested. Thank you so much for sharing, can't wait to read more
October 6th, 2016 21:33
Infidelity
Augustus said:
Some times life is strange and crazy. Thanks for sharing.
October 6th, 2016 21:31
Augustus said:
Some times life is strange and crazy. Thanks for sharing.
October 6th, 2016 21:31
Purple Rain
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks you BB for posting this beautiful BIRD SONG here and on my Bird Fusion Poem. We do envy the BIRDS three dimensional freedom in the atmosphere while we are trapped by gravity on the lithosphere. We can now fly but only to get from A to B and then to be retrapped by gravity and even worse by Society ! I love your final triplet because it echoes the desire of all our weary earthbound souls ! "Nobody will control me ~ Angel wings will free my soul ~ There it goes". Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN (UK)
October 6th, 2016 07:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks you BB for posting this beautiful BIRD SONG here and on my Bird Fusion Poem. We do envy the BIRDS three dimensional freedom in the atmosphere while we are trapped by gravity on the lithosphere. We can now fly but only to get from A to B and then to be retrapped by gravity and even worse by Society ! I love your final triplet because it echoes the desire of all our weary earthbound souls ! "Nobody will control me ~ Angel wings will free my soul ~ There it goes". Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN (UK)
October 6th, 2016 07:25
Don\'t Breathe
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BB GREAT FIRST POEM ! True Love is elusive and so often (I'm 33 and still single !) we have to make do with a "come and go" series of ephemeral relationships. I know what you mean about "breathing underwater" I did it once and had to be "pumped out". I would like to marry my current GF (Christine 28) so hope springs eternal ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
September 13th, 2016 04:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BB GREAT FIRST POEM ! True Love is elusive and so often (I'm 33 and still single !) we have to make do with a "come and go" series of ephemeral relationships. I know what you mean about "breathing underwater" I did it once and had to be "pumped out". I would like to marry my current GF (Christine 28) so hope springs eternal ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
September 13th, 2016 04:04
Don\'t Breathe
Augustus said:
I see it as finding and knowing yourself. You are not incomplete without another. I take it you feel like you are drowning. I was working hard to make sense of this. I know that I struggle with parts of poems that are unclear as to their meaning but in an odd way make sense, but only to me because I was there. Keep on writing.
September 12th, 2016 21:42
Augustus said:
I see it as finding and knowing yourself. You are not incomplete without another. I take it you feel like you are drowning. I was working hard to make sense of this. I know that I struggle with parts of poems that are unclear as to their meaning but in an odd way make sense, but only to me because I was there. Keep on writing.
September 12th, 2016 21:42
