Comments received on poems by moonlightdancers
My sorrow
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MD ~ Thanks for an excellent Love Poem in Free Verse ~ I love the flow and the Elizabethan Language (thee ~ thy etc) almost Shakespearean ! You pledge your love and ask questions "Does my company please thee ?" and "I hold you so close that thy heart ~ will beat the same as my love ?" I hope and pray you get some answers ~ love can be elusive ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN.
September 16th, 2016 01:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MD ~ Thanks for an excellent Love Poem in Free Verse ~ I love the flow and the Elizabethan Language (thee ~ thy etc) almost Shakespearean ! You pledge your love and ask questions "Does my company please thee ?" and "I hold you so close that thy heart ~ will beat the same as my love ?" I hope and pray you get some answers ~ love can be elusive ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN.
September 16th, 2016 01:33