Comments received on poems by ses



A South London , Back Garden In May
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

OMG SES THIS IS SO SO BEAUTIFUL ~ MAY the perfect Month as Spring morphs into Summer ~ all nature feels it and come ALIVE. Your poem paints the picture I see iin my Mum's back garden ~ pop music ~ police ~ rabbits (and guinea pigs) ~ ice cream jingle ~ cats ~ birds ~ planes ~ dogs ~ we really are surrounded by BEAUTY ! You are lovely thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks B

October 1st, 2016 09:51

THIS TIME
Tony36 said:

Cheer Up, Great write

September 28th, 2016 13:16

Don\'t !
taylerdk21 said:

wow! what a beautiful poem. it's so sad but very well written. hope there are more to come

September 27th, 2016 14:46

The Darkness
Tony36 said:

Love it great write

September 27th, 2016 12:54

The Darkness
Jeff said:

Nice write....good work

September 27th, 2016 04:58

Don\'t !
Augustus said:

I like the not being able to move with the lead shoes. Welcome. Part of dealing with depression is to express how you feel, get it off your chest, so to speak.

September 26th, 2016 16:32

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Jeff said:

I certainly agree with those 3 people....this is a very well written poem....great job

September 26th, 2016 15:56

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WriteBeLight said:

I liked it very much! I feel for you and I am glad that writing helps.

September 26th, 2016 15:06

Don\'t !
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME SES ~ Thanks for sharing very accurately what it is like to live with depression. I hope you found it cathartic. Reading it helped me to understand how depression feels. I have had Friends with depression who (in retrospect) acted like you describe. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ more please ~ BRIAN

September 26th, 2016 13:42