Comments received on poems by 0ddity
Displaced.
Augustus said:
Sometimes you just can\'t shake that sinking feeling. Well done. Hugs.
December 20th, 2016 16:03
Augustus said:
Sometimes you just can\'t shake that sinking feeling. Well done. Hugs.
December 20th, 2016 16:03
Nothing inside
Summersounds68 said:
This is a sad poem. As I read it, I envision an empty shell of a person. Dwelling in sorrow encourages \'pity parties\' not only for the poet but also the reader. I am looking forward to reading a happy poem from you.
~Sonia
October 21st, 2016 13:13
Summersounds68 said:
This is a sad poem. As I read it, I envision an empty shell of a person. Dwelling in sorrow encourages \'pity parties\' not only for the poet but also the reader. I am looking forward to reading a happy poem from you.
~Sonia
October 21st, 2016 13:13
Time for change
rainbowhalo1 said:
your certainly not alone.i didnt just read it i felt it.
September 28th, 2016 13:22
rainbowhalo1 said:
your certainly not alone.i didnt just read it i felt it.
September 28th, 2016 13:22
What are you missing?
Augustus said:
Beautifully written. You are describing the Bipolar depression, perhaps with a touch of drug addiction. Love the line "waltzing through the galaxy."
September 27th, 2016 22:39
Augustus said:
Beautifully written. You are describing the Bipolar depression, perhaps with a touch of drug addiction. Love the line "waltzing through the galaxy."
September 27th, 2016 22:39
Ticking bomb
Augustus said:
Healing takes a long time. Take care. Enjoyed.
September 23rd, 2016 11:16
Augustus said:
Healing takes a long time. Take care. Enjoyed.
September 23rd, 2016 11:16
Ticking bomb
Bookbag said:
(I'm gonna just add to yours, I really enjoyed this)
Maybe implode
I don't know nothing slow I move at tempo
But what'd you expect though
I'm on the edge low
er-ing myself cause I can't find purpose still
Look at my friends kill
Look at my mind kill
That means I have no one
I walk on the line still
Looking at these four walls
I'm sick of breathing
Who needs oxygen if this world is deceiving
Filling my lungs with carbon dioxide from the heathens
You better believe it
I'm not misleading
If I wrote it I mean it
Just take me now cause I'm tired of these thoughts being kept as concealing
September 23rd, 2016 11:02
Bookbag said:
(I'm gonna just add to yours, I really enjoyed this)
Maybe implode
I don't know nothing slow I move at tempo
But what'd you expect though
I'm on the edge low
er-ing myself cause I can't find purpose still
Look at my friends kill
Look at my mind kill
That means I have no one
I walk on the line still
Looking at these four walls
I'm sick of breathing
Who needs oxygen if this world is deceiving
Filling my lungs with carbon dioxide from the heathens
You better believe it
I'm not misleading
If I wrote it I mean it
Just take me now cause I'm tired of these thoughts being kept as concealing
September 23rd, 2016 11:02
Endless wonder
Augustus said:
I like this. Can you shed a little light on "spark a clip"?
September 22nd, 2016 15:52
Augustus said:
I like this. Can you shed a little light on "spark a clip"?
September 22nd, 2016 15:52
Anxiety
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very Very well written...it takes you there..anyone who have had anxiety issues can relate for certain...Great job!
September 20th, 2016 17:17
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very Very well written...it takes you there..anyone who have had anxiety issues can relate for certain...Great job!
September 20th, 2016 17:17
Oblivion.
Augustus said:
As though you have all the ingredients for a perfect storm from which there is no return. Thanks.
September 19th, 2016 22:44
Augustus said:
As though you have all the ingredients for a perfect storm from which there is no return. Thanks.
September 19th, 2016 22:44
Oblivion.
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
wow..this is heavy and depressing...there is hope ..trust me...just smoke the weed..lay off the booze..it makes shit ten times worse
September 19th, 2016 22:28
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
wow..this is heavy and depressing...there is hope ..trust me...just smoke the weed..lay off the booze..it makes shit ten times worse
September 19th, 2016 22:28
