Comments received on poems by jaybob



Never will forgive myself
Poetic Dan said:

Forgiveness is a powerful tool but should always be used on ourselves first.
Heartfelt words, I felt the pain

August 15th, 2017 12:16

Our differences
Alf W said:

I see a long time has gone by since you wrote this poem, so am hoping things are good between you. You description, and the resultant poem, tells a story. There cannot be many folk like your girlfriend. She has a heart of gold, pure integrity and doesn\'t treat people as they treat her. She is a standard to live up to, not to break down. A person after God\'s own heart. Treasure her. I love your poem.. so intense but also so well written.

August 15th, 2017 11:06

Our differences
Edward Charles McDevitt said:

Wow jaybob. I\'m impressed. Not your typical poem, I do however get the message and, you express it so well. That\'s what is so unique about this site. All the different writers and how they go about their words and how it comes across to others!!! Well written my friend!

August 13th, 2017 04:50

Our differences
Augustus said:

sounds like a very loving person. We either accept people for who they are or leave. Yet I understand your paternal instincts. Nicely done.

September 27th, 2016 22:32