Comments received on poems by Jayhawk51



Chaos
V.Hope said:

Wow. This is really good!
Keep up with the good work.

September 30th, 2016 19:48

Exhausted
Jayhawk51 said:

Thanks everyone. I just posted a spoken word style work. Again, please continue the feedback/comments.

September 29th, 2016 23:15

Exhausted
Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33) said:

I agree, although extremely dark and negative it was very well written.honesrky...depressing poetry is highly acclaimed ..people love it and eat it up..life experiences too..so, this kind of work will attract the right readers and the rest imif them may skim over it but won't keep them reading..great job writing it..you can't please everyone no matter what u write

September 29th, 2016 01:21

Exhausted
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 28th, 2016 13:11

Exhausted
WriteBeLight said:

Perfect title. A very sad, but very well-written piece.

September 28th, 2016 11:26

Exhausted
ShadedSorrow said:

I find this poem to be a perfect view of my outlook on life. Very good poem.

September 28th, 2016 08:50

Fractured
Augustus said:

As if it won't take much to push you over the edge. And so what, " I'm worthless anyway.", I can hear you saying. Depression sucks.

September 27th, 2016 21:43

What Others See
Jayhawk51 said:

I plan on posting something new everyday. So feel free to keep up and leave feedback

September 27th, 2016 20:55

What Others See
Jeff said:

Great write...Very well done

September 27th, 2016 14:34

What Others See
Jayhawk51 said:

I try to write everyday. I just want to help others who know what this feels like

September 27th, 2016 14:21

What Others See
Ternic73 said:

You just wrote very much how I feel. Thank you

September 26th, 2016 23:29

What Others See
Augustus said:

That is a tough battle. Keep up the fight and continue to write.

September 26th, 2016 20:34