Comments received on poems by Simeon Schwartz
Twinkle, Twinkle Little Faggot
Barry Hodges said:
This was a very strange piece but I laughed several times. A couple of points:
(1) what does \"my ideas were to bash you athroes in the head\" mean?
(2) in line 1, \"shone\", not \"shined\".
January 17th, 2020 12:47
Barry Hodges said:
This was a very strange piece but I laughed several times. A couple of points:
(1) what does \"my ideas were to bash you athroes in the head\" mean?
(2) in line 1, \"shone\", not \"shined\".
January 17th, 2020 12:47
Twinkle, Twinkle Little Faggot
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very well written. Nice work
October 10th, 2016 22:18
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very well written. Nice work
October 10th, 2016 22:18
Despairingly Curious
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SIMEON ~ Thanks for a DISPAIRINGLY CURIOUS poem straight from your heart ! All you describes happens to each of us and it is difficult to cope with. A reason for you despair is given in the final line "I've lost my only beloved" "so she'd kiss my pains away". From experience when this happens I too justwant to curl up and die. Thanks for caring ~ thinking of you ~ BRIAN
September 29th, 2016 04:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SIMEON ~ Thanks for a DISPAIRINGLY CURIOUS poem straight from your heart ! All you describes happens to each of us and it is difficult to cope with. A reason for you despair is given in the final line "I've lost my only beloved" "so she'd kiss my pains away". From experience when this happens I too justwant to curl up and die. Thanks for caring ~ thinking of you ~ BRIAN
September 29th, 2016 04:05
