Comments received on poems by patriots
Relationships
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating....realistic look at nonbinding relationships....your concluding line is sweet. I enjoyed this.
February 8th, 2011 22:51
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating....realistic look at nonbinding relationships....your concluding line is sweet. I enjoyed this.
February 8th, 2011 22:51
My World
Cheeky Missy said:
The foul language makes your point, yet makes me wince. Your ugly world...and so many others sing the same song...it's ugly...dog-eat-dog world. You expressed the pain and frustration and reality very well.
February 3rd, 2011 00:13
Cheeky Missy said:
The foul language makes your point, yet makes me wince. Your ugly world...and so many others sing the same song...it's ugly...dog-eat-dog world. You expressed the pain and frustration and reality very well.
February 3rd, 2011 00:13
Lost it all
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Excellent! But how could words that would otherwise make someone's day screw the rest of your life? You described the remorse so perfectly. Beautiful, in spite of the tragedy.
February 1st, 2011 15:12
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Excellent! But how could words that would otherwise make someone's day screw the rest of your life? You described the remorse so perfectly. Beautiful, in spite of the tragedy.
February 1st, 2011 15:12
Died Young
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw. This is a very sweet tribute to losing somebody...in their youth or older. You depicted it well. I enjoyed it.
January 30th, 2011 23:55
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw. This is a very sweet tribute to losing somebody...in their youth or older. You depicted it well. I enjoyed it.
January 30th, 2011 23:55
Young Soldiers
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting. Like going out to war....the "pep talk"/prep talk as they head out.....into the battlefield called "life," right? Fascinating.
January 29th, 2011 18:36
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting. Like going out to war....the "pep talk"/prep talk as they head out.....into the battlefield called "life," right? Fascinating.
January 29th, 2011 18:36
Where I'm From
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating, beautiful, excellent! Reminiscent to me of Rodney Atkins' "Where I Come From"...same angle/theme, different setting....tempts me to try it for myself now...maybe. You've depicted it delightfully, even though it is not a delightful scene...unvarnished and almost simply stated so effectively.....almost rather haughty in it's assessment, with an allusion to humility. I quite enjoyed this....great to be taken to your world for a moment....you drew it so well.
January 27th, 2011 11:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating, beautiful, excellent! Reminiscent to me of Rodney Atkins' "Where I Come From"...same angle/theme, different setting....tempts me to try it for myself now...maybe. You've depicted it delightfully, even though it is not a delightful scene...unvarnished and almost simply stated so effectively.....almost rather haughty in it's assessment, with an allusion to humility. I quite enjoyed this....great to be taken to your world for a moment....you drew it so well.
January 27th, 2011 11:35
