Betrayed
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME LUIS ~ Thank for an elegant first poem replete with rhyme and rhythm ~ BUT ~ Such a sad and pained content ! Those of us who are older (I'm 33) have experienced some degree of betrayal from one we loved. We can empathise but yours seems very deep and intense. Your "pain of betrayal" runs very deep. Broken heart ~ heaviness ~ insecurities ~ loving blind ~ left so burnt. It touched me ~ I trust you found it cathartic. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B

September 30th, 2016 17:01