Comments received on poems by Adara
Survivor
P.X. Vexxus said:
The world is wrought with pain, fear and suffering. I write about the darkness in this world, the effects on people I once knew. I liked your poem a lot, and I hope you are no longer haunted by your past. Thanks for sharing, such deep emotions.
October 1st, 2016 14:58
P.X. Vexxus said:
The world is wrought with pain, fear and suffering. I write about the darkness in this world, the effects on people I once knew. I liked your poem a lot, and I hope you are no longer haunted by your past. Thanks for sharing, such deep emotions.
October 1st, 2016 14:58
Survivor
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ADARA ~ Thanks you for sharing a very personal first poem. I trust you found writing cathartic. It moved me and made me ashamed to be a Man. My MUM tught me to treat Ladies as ANGELS and I always do. Men who abuse young girls should be castrated and shut way from society. I do understand how you feel and you have expressed it poignantly, Broken ~ chained ~ no escape ~ controlled ~ never free. I'm praying that you will find some release ~ Yours BRIAN
October 1st, 2016 06:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ADARA ~ Thanks you for sharing a very personal first poem. I trust you found writing cathartic. It moved me and made me ashamed to be a Man. My MUM tught me to treat Ladies as ANGELS and I always do. Men who abuse young girls should be castrated and shut way from society. I do understand how you feel and you have expressed it poignantly, Broken ~ chained ~ no escape ~ controlled ~ never free. I'm praying that you will find some release ~ Yours BRIAN
October 1st, 2016 06:00
Survivor
Rosie904 said:
I change my mind. Every day fits. Depends how I read it. And Dont worry I beat that boy u.. Hey, I journal too. If I Dont I will literally think thoughts in my sleep, haha.
September 30th, 2016 23:33
Rosie904 said:
I change my mind. Every day fits. Depends how I read it. And Dont worry I beat that boy u.. Hey, I journal too. If I Dont I will literally think thoughts in my sleep, haha.
September 30th, 2016 23:33
Survivor
Rosie904 said:
When in emotional pain words just flow into you, Dont they?
One thing I would take out is the "every day" but I read it in my own tone so idk. Its a good one though. I had a similar experience so your poem ached my heart a bit.
September 30th, 2016 22:42
Rosie904 said:
When in emotional pain words just flow into you, Dont they?
One thing I would take out is the "every day" but I read it in my own tone so idk. Its a good one though. I had a similar experience so your poem ached my heart a bit.
September 30th, 2016 22:42
Survivor
Augustus said:
This is a very nice poem. I can't imagine the horror you went through. Yes he deserves to be dead. Sending you messages of peace, confidence, pride, and strength.
September 30th, 2016 21:49
Augustus said:
This is a very nice poem. I can't imagine the horror you went through. Yes he deserves to be dead. Sending you messages of peace, confidence, pride, and strength.
September 30th, 2016 21:49
