Comments received on poems by VhladTheGreat
Your Love
Augustus said:
Up till almost the end of the poem the relationship reminds me of codependency, where you loose your identity, so closely tied to another person. Then you separate. There is that longing for that missing part. Nice write.
October 10th, 2016 16:03
Augustus said:
Up till almost the end of the poem the relationship reminds me of codependency, where you loose your identity, so closely tied to another person. Then you separate. There is that longing for that missing part. Nice write.
October 10th, 2016 16:03
Your Love
Alda said:
Very nice. Love is beautiful. Love can hurt. The duality of love is well expressed here, thanks for sharing.
October 10th, 2016 13:06
Alda said:
Very nice. Love is beautiful. Love can hurt. The duality of love is well expressed here, thanks for sharing.
October 10th, 2016 13:06
Best For You
vanabba3 said:
Well,
Again, I can relate to this one too... Well, your taking it better than I would, but with age, you find out that this doesn't hurt as bad in time... and writing is very therapeutic. Sadness and darkness is where my nightmares come from too... Nice work on this!
October 8th, 2016 20:03
vanabba3 said:
Well,
Again, I can relate to this one too... Well, your taking it better than I would, but with age, you find out that this doesn't hurt as bad in time... and writing is very therapeutic. Sadness and darkness is where my nightmares come from too... Nice work on this!
October 8th, 2016 20:03
Best For You
vanabba3 said:
Well,
Again, I can relate to this one too... Well, your taking it better than I would, but with age, you find out that this doesn't hurt as bad in time... and writing is very therapeutic. Sadness and darkness is where my nightmares come from too... Nice work on this!
October 8th, 2016 20:03
vanabba3 said:
Well,
Again, I can relate to this one too... Well, your taking it better than I would, but with age, you find out that this doesn't hurt as bad in time... and writing is very therapeutic. Sadness and darkness is where my nightmares come from too... Nice work on this!
October 8th, 2016 20:03
Best For You
Augustus said:
It is difficult to accept rejection so gracefully. Likely signifies real maturity. Wish him well and go on with your life. -----versus----Some of us would be wishing our former lover a slow painful death. Enjoyed.
October 8th, 2016 16:35
Augustus said:
It is difficult to accept rejection so gracefully. Likely signifies real maturity. Wish him well and go on with your life. -----versus----Some of us would be wishing our former lover a slow painful death. Enjoyed.
October 8th, 2016 16:35
Wandering Mind
vanabba3 said:
I am compelled to say this is a great poem because if I don't... I would hate to read the sequel to this... However, it is very grim, and I like it, but hope your not experiencing this personally. If so, would like to know more...
October 7th, 2016 20:40
vanabba3 said:
I am compelled to say this is a great poem because if I don't... I would hate to read the sequel to this... However, it is very grim, and I like it, but hope your not experiencing this personally. If so, would like to know more...
October 7th, 2016 20:40
Wandering Mind
Alda said:
I like this. It is very thought provoking and deep.
October 7th, 2016 20:02
Alda said:
I like this. It is very thought provoking and deep.
October 7th, 2016 20:02
