Comments received on poems by Dannirose
Scared to love you
Cheeky Missy said:
It stinks but I\'ve begun a comment and erased the same several times now, forcing me to continue despite being too squeamish. Love, if you will be true, yet likewise remember that love is not selfish. For your own sake you\'d be wiser not to trust him, yet notwithstanding to love him, no strings attached. Hang in there. You make me wince, spilling painful reality exquisitely poignant and heart-wrenching on the page likeas if we might flip through your diary, if only we might do it charitably. I hope for the best, glad you are scared; that\'s safer than otherwise. Love you!
February 13th, 2017 21:09
Cheeky Missy said:
It stinks but I\'ve begun a comment and erased the same several times now, forcing me to continue despite being too squeamish. Love, if you will be true, yet likewise remember that love is not selfish. For your own sake you\'d be wiser not to trust him, yet notwithstanding to love him, no strings attached. Hang in there. You make me wince, spilling painful reality exquisitely poignant and heart-wrenching on the page likeas if we might flip through your diary, if only we might do it charitably. I hope for the best, glad you are scared; that\'s safer than otherwise. Love you!
February 13th, 2017 21:09
Unavailable love
Dannirose said:
Thank you so much for your kind comments it\'s much appreciated
October 18th, 2016 19:08
Dannirose said:
Thank you so much for your kind comments it\'s much appreciated
October 18th, 2016 19:08
Unavailable love
BrokenEyes said:
Gorgeous. I\'ve been in the same situation myself.
October 13th, 2016 18:12
BrokenEyes said:
Gorgeous. I\'ve been in the same situation myself.
October 13th, 2016 18:12
Unavailable love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME DANNI ~ Thank you for a very elegantly written first poem. It has great rhythm and it is replete with rhyme. The structure complements the subject ~ unavailable love ~ which is something most of us have faced (i\'m 35 and still single). Unavailable Love poses many problems but (in my experience) many of them can be surmounted. Thinking of you BRIAN
October 13th, 2016 17:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME DANNI ~ Thank you for a very elegantly written first poem. It has great rhythm and it is replete with rhyme. The structure complements the subject ~ unavailable love ~ which is something most of us have faced (i\'m 35 and still single). Unavailable Love poses many problems but (in my experience) many of them can be surmounted. Thinking of you BRIAN
October 13th, 2016 17:11
Unavailable love
Tony36 said:
Sounds like the love story of my life. Great write
October 12th, 2016 19:13
Tony36 said:
Sounds like the love story of my life. Great write
October 12th, 2016 19:13
