Comments received on poems by themacoroini
dreaming
Augustus said:
That can be disheartening, especially when rejected. Hopefully not suicidal. Nicely done.
October 16th, 2016 16:09
Augustus said:
That can be disheartening, especially when rejected. Hopefully not suicidal. Nicely done.
October 16th, 2016 16:09
Stars
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Welcome TH ~ Thanks for your first poem . It is a well presented Modern Poem ~ one continuous unpunctuated sentence but with logical lines (not continuous prose) I like that ~ it looks like a poem. There is rhyme ~ despite your denial ~ it is acceptable in Modern Poetry ! Lines 2 4 6 rhyme as do lines 9 10 12 13. This gives the poem rhythm and flow and makes it easier to recite. I am a performance poet. Also because it has 14 lines it can also be classed as a \"Free Verse Sonnet with irregular meter\". Love the message ~ it is a good poem ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN. Please check my poems ~ Thanks
October 14th, 2016 15:07
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Welcome TH ~ Thanks for your first poem . It is a well presented Modern Poem ~ one continuous unpunctuated sentence but with logical lines (not continuous prose) I like that ~ it looks like a poem. There is rhyme ~ despite your denial ~ it is acceptable in Modern Poetry ! Lines 2 4 6 rhyme as do lines 9 10 12 13. This gives the poem rhythm and flow and makes it easier to recite. I am a performance poet. Also because it has 14 lines it can also be classed as a \"Free Verse Sonnet with irregular meter\". Love the message ~ it is a good poem ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN. Please check my poems ~ Thanks
October 14th, 2016 15:07
