Give Me Your Heart
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME MC ~ Thanks for you first poem ~ Nice structure ~ well spaced \"free verse\" poem with plenty of rhythm which complemented the topic of HEART BEATS. It is very clinical in its description of a Heart Transplant ~ Replaced by a LOVE POEM , Christian Barnard said he was surprised by the cavity when he removed the heart ~ have to be a substantial poem ? But I see you replace the heart so all is well that ends well ! It seems a fair exchange ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please. Youirs BRIAN ~ Please check my poems THANKS..

October 15th, 2016 17:30