Comments received on poems by LynnBlackwell
The Fool
peto said:
A brilliant read
Could almost hear the music
\"Without the glove \"
That line really stands out
And appears to be of concern to you and rightly so if you feel the fool
Loved it
September 7th, 2023 03:57
peto said:
A brilliant read
Could almost hear the music
\"Without the glove \"
That line really stands out
And appears to be of concern to you and rightly so if you feel the fool
Loved it
September 7th, 2023 03:57
The Shadow
HangingbyaHalo said:
The yearning passion in this writing is amazing! Well written and spicy ❤️
Thank you for sharing.
-B-
November 22nd, 2021 04:53
HangingbyaHalo said:
The yearning passion in this writing is amazing! Well written and spicy ❤️
Thank you for sharing.
-B-
November 22nd, 2021 04:53
Eating Frozen Grapes While Sad
L. B. Mek said:
\'Eating Frozen Grapes, While Sad\'
guess that\'s one way
to make Wine
out of regrets: Tears...
(liked your title, took me
to that biblical reference
of making wine from water)
thanks for \'transmuting\' your pain
and Choosing to share
your impassioned words
of self-expressional: Defiance!
August 6th, 2021 03:31
L. B. Mek said:
\'Eating Frozen Grapes, While Sad\'
guess that\'s one way
to make Wine
out of regrets: Tears...
(liked your title, took me
to that biblical reference
of making wine from water)
thanks for \'transmuting\' your pain
and Choosing to share
your impassioned words
of self-expressional: Defiance!
August 6th, 2021 03:31
dancing with the devil
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read, a step back in time
to when youthful ignorance, denoted
relationship IQ, to mere lusted base numbers
either:
anticipated and memorialised
or sated and demystified...
thanks for sharing
May 14th, 2021 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read, a step back in time
to when youthful ignorance, denoted
relationship IQ, to mere lusted base numbers
either:
anticipated and memorialised
or sated and demystified...
thanks for sharing
May 14th, 2021 06:08
dancing with the devil
orchidee said:
Ohhh, it\'s too much for me. Swoon! heehee.
May 14th, 2021 01:33
orchidee said:
Ohhh, it\'s too much for me. Swoon! heehee.
May 14th, 2021 01:33
To My Mother, My Wondering Angel
Hinnant said:
This poem moved me. Thank you for posting.
October 25th, 2020 13:32
Hinnant said:
This poem moved me. Thank you for posting.
October 25th, 2020 13:32
Late Night Thoughts
Angel Of Incidence said:
Your imaging is raw and sharp! Enjoyed!
April 14th, 2018 20:56
Angel Of Incidence said:
Your imaging is raw and sharp! Enjoyed!
April 14th, 2018 20:56
A Letter To My First Love
JayDleo said:
This was touching. I felt the passion in each word and for a second it seemed as though I was in your shoes. This was a step forward it feels like. To Letting go.
December 6th, 2017 18:08
JayDleo said:
This was touching. I felt the passion in each word and for a second it seemed as though I was in your shoes. This was a step forward it feels like. To Letting go.
December 6th, 2017 18:08
The Moon
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LYNN ~ for a very elegant piece of PROSE (this site accepts all \"writing\") The content is awesome ~ sad in parts ~ but also redeeming because you pay tribute to our lovely SISTER MOON. She is so so much nearer and accessible and beautiful ~ then BROTHER SUN ~ and some of our BROTHERS have even walked on her sacred SURFACE ! OUR MOON is unique and is perfect in its size and position and all she does for us ~ Night Light ~ Tides etc etc. I love the fact that in you poignant story the Moonstruck Lady is so so impressed with the Moon\'s Prettiness & Perfection that she defers her suicide. MORAL ~ Never underestimate the awesome POWER of SISTER MOON ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poem DISJOINTED LOVE ~ Thanks B.
September 27th, 2017 10:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LYNN ~ for a very elegant piece of PROSE (this site accepts all \"writing\") The content is awesome ~ sad in parts ~ but also redeeming because you pay tribute to our lovely SISTER MOON. She is so so much nearer and accessible and beautiful ~ then BROTHER SUN ~ and some of our BROTHERS have even walked on her sacred SURFACE ! OUR MOON is unique and is perfect in its size and position and all she does for us ~ Night Light ~ Tides etc etc. I love the fact that in you poignant story the Moonstruck Lady is so so impressed with the Moon\'s Prettiness & Perfection that she defers her suicide. MORAL ~ Never underestimate the awesome POWER of SISTER MOON ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poem DISJOINTED LOVE ~ Thanks B.
September 27th, 2017 10:39
The Moon
Accidental Poet said:
A very heartfelt write lynn. Obviously, you were at a place where so many arrive at without a clue as to what to do. But I believe the Moon\'s answer to you was heard in your heart and you made the Moon smile. You\'ll always have a friend in the Moon. And I was just reminded of a song by Barbra Streisand in the movie \"A Star Is Born\" called \"Woman In the Moon\". I think you\'d really appreciate it. ; )
September 27th, 2017 03:51
Accidental Poet said:
A very heartfelt write lynn. Obviously, you were at a place where so many arrive at without a clue as to what to do. But I believe the Moon\'s answer to you was heard in your heart and you made the Moon smile. You\'ll always have a friend in the Moon. And I was just reminded of a song by Barbra Streisand in the movie \"A Star Is Born\" called \"Woman In the Moon\". I think you\'d really appreciate it. ; )
September 27th, 2017 03:51
Want
Christina8 said:
I loved this write along with the visual. Very erotic poem-great read!
November 15th, 2016 14:01
Christina8 said:
I loved this write along with the visual. Very erotic poem-great read!
November 15th, 2016 14:01
Want
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL LYNN ~ Love the visual and the thought and actions behind it ! Thanks fro a very erotuc poem describing the senses and sensations we experience when we are in love and making love ! The touches ~ kisses ~ scents ~ tastes ~ bites and slaps ~ loves perfections ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN
November 15th, 2016 05:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL LYNN ~ Love the visual and the thought and actions behind it ! Thanks fro a very erotuc poem describing the senses and sensations we experience when we are in love and making love ! The touches ~ kisses ~ scents ~ tastes ~ bites and slaps ~ loves perfections ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN
November 15th, 2016 05:38
Not Your Lover
WildMoonChild said:
This is the best thing i\'ve read so far, actually in awe
November 5th, 2016 21:27
WildMoonChild said:
This is the best thing i\'ve read so far, actually in awe
November 5th, 2016 21:27
Not Your Lover
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Emotive and raw. U write in an attractive sexy way. Nice to read from u again.
October 30th, 2016 08:18
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Emotive and raw. U write in an attractive sexy way. Nice to read from u again.
October 30th, 2016 08:18
Not Your Lover
Augustus said:
Graphic portrait of the turmoil of a purely sexual relationship. Nicely done.
October 24th, 2016 11:36
Augustus said:
Graphic portrait of the turmoil of a purely sexual relationship. Nicely done.
October 24th, 2016 11:36
The Magic We Could Make
BSmooth said:
Great job don\'t stop writing. Looking to reaf more from you
October 23rd, 2016 14:49
BSmooth said:
Great job don\'t stop writing. Looking to reaf more from you
October 23rd, 2016 14:49
The Magic We Could Make
willyweed said:
clever and well written with a hot pen! nice work ww
October 22nd, 2016 09:24
willyweed said:
clever and well written with a hot pen! nice work ww
October 22nd, 2016 09:24
The Magic We Could Make
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Voila erotic and sensational. The creativity is noteworthy. I\'m a professional poet so I appreciate great poetry. Kudos.
I\'m a new poet here, pls do comment my First poem here.
October 22nd, 2016 04:03
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Voila erotic and sensational. The creativity is noteworthy. I\'m a professional poet so I appreciate great poetry. Kudos.
I\'m a new poet here, pls do comment my First poem here.
October 22nd, 2016 04:03
