Comments received on poems by domdom_lynn



Late Night Thoughts
Angel Of Incidence said:

Your imaging is raw and sharp! Enjoyed!

April 14th, 2018 20:56

Too Serious
RiverJordan said:

Youwch

March 6th, 2018 02:56

A Letter To My First Love
domdom_lynn said:



December 7th, 2017 01:42

A Letter To My First Love
JayDleo said:

This was touching. I felt the passion in each word and for a second it seemed as though I was in your shoes. This was a step forward it feels like. To Letting go.

December 6th, 2017 18:08

The Moon
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks LYNN ~ for a very elegant piece of PROSE (this site accepts all \"writing\") The content is awesome ~ sad in parts ~ but also redeeming because you pay tribute to our lovely SISTER MOON. She is so so much nearer and accessible and beautiful ~ then BROTHER SUN ~ and some of our BROTHERS have even walked on her sacred SURFACE ! OUR MOON is unique and is perfect in its size and position and all she does for us ~ Night Light ~ Tides etc etc. I love the fact that in you poignant story the Moonstruck Lady is so so impressed with the Moon\'s Prettiness & Perfection that she defers her suicide. MORAL ~ Never underestimate the awesome POWER of SISTER MOON ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poem DISJOINTED LOVE ~ Thanks B.

September 27th, 2017 10:39

The Moon
Accidental Poet said:

A very heartfelt write lynn. Obviously, you were at a place where so many arrive at without a clue as to what to do. But I believe the Moon\'s answer to you was heard in your heart and you made the Moon smile. You\'ll always have a friend in the Moon. And I was just reminded of a song by Barbra Streisand in the movie \"A Star Is Born\" called \"Woman In the Moon\". I think you\'d really appreciate it. ; )

September 27th, 2017 03:51

Want
Christina8 said:

I loved this write along with the visual. Very erotic poem-great read!

November 15th, 2016 14:01

Want
Tony36 said:

Awesome Awesome Awesome write

November 15th, 2016 09:04

Want
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

BEAUTIFUL LYNN ~ Love the visual and the thought and actions behind it ! Thanks fro a very erotuc poem describing the senses and sensations we experience when we are in love and making love ! The touches ~ kisses ~ scents ~ tastes ~ bites and slaps ~ loves perfections ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN

November 15th, 2016 05:38

Not Your Lover
WildMoonChild said:

This is the best thing i\'ve read so far, actually in awe

November 5th, 2016 21:27

Not Your Lover
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Emotive and raw. U write in an attractive sexy way. Nice to read from u again.

October 30th, 2016 08:18

Not Your Lover
Augustus said:

Graphic portrait of the turmoil of a purely sexual relationship. Nicely done.

October 24th, 2016 11:36

Not Your Lover
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

October 24th, 2016 09:09

Not Your Lover
willyweed said:

nicely done great flow and structure. ww

October 24th, 2016 08:31

The Magic We Could Make
BSmooth said:

Great job don\'t stop writing. Looking to reaf more from you

October 23rd, 2016 14:49

The Magic We Could Make
BSmooth said:

Well written

October 23rd, 2016 09:54

The Magic We Could Make
willyweed said:

clever and well written with a hot pen! nice work ww

October 22nd, 2016 09:24

The Magic We Could Make
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write

October 22nd, 2016 08:36

The Magic We Could Make
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Voila erotic and sensational. The creativity is noteworthy. I\'m a professional poet so I appreciate great poetry. Kudos.
I\'m a new poet here, pls do comment my First poem here.

October 22nd, 2016 04:03