Compressed, Compacted
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

I say this is a splendid impressive rhyme scheme and the wording poetically expressive and lyrical in an advanced literate way. Many admirable lines, llike \' my understanding convoluted, how u rhymed that in with the other wordings wow in fine flow. Kudos.


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November 1st, 2016 02:05

Compressed, Compacted
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME PADDY ~ Thank you for a very honest first poem. Love the structure pulsating with rhyme and rhythm ~ very readable and reciteable ! As we progress through life our ambitions and aspirations do become more ~ compressed & compacted ~ dilated & deluded ~ eluded and evaded OK. However because we slow down we stay in equilibrium and don\'t notice till we drop off the edge ! Every edge has its compensations ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please ! Please check my poems ~ Yours BRIAN ~

October 31st, 2016 18:23