Comments received on poems by mylittleheart



Id be lying if I said you make me feel nothing at all
Evergreen said:

I love this!

April 13th, 2020 00:09

is it you that i miss?
The Invisible said:

Very well written :)

June 11th, 2017 18:09

is it you that i miss?
ShannonXx said:

Enjoyed the depth emotion in this, well done :)

June 11th, 2017 15:38

is it you that i miss?
SorrowfullyHappy said:

this is deep i like it

June 11th, 2017 15:34

But it was not love
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. Fleeting moments can be so meaningful yet so painful.

June 10th, 2017 00:46

But it was not love
Louis Gibbs said:

Sweet, insightful poem, mylittleheart. Love the phrase, \'intolerable infatuation\'.

June 9th, 2017 18:17

The start was the end
Augustus said:

Love the flare of confidence at the end, and telling it like it is, no crying, no victim, simply truth.

June 8th, 2017 22:11

The start was the end
Louis Gibbs said:

Nice example of an (almost) unpunctuated poem. Enjoyed it, mylittleheart!

June 8th, 2017 16:53

our little hearts
The Invisible said:

Short yet very awesome. Good job :D

June 7th, 2017 21:24

our little hearts
hidden.shine said:

I love this.

June 7th, 2017 18:36

every time we met
Louis Gibbs said:

Sounds like \'it\' stayed pretty wet there for a while before cooling off. I like your poem, Mylittleheart!

June 5th, 2017 17:59

do you think of me sometimes?
Saima said:

You\'re really good at writing, this poem is amazing💜

June 4th, 2017 19:40

do you think of me sometimes?
ShannonXx said:

Great write

June 3rd, 2017 17:30

do you think of me sometimes?
The Invisible said:

Wow, that\'s really deep. Nice job.

June 3rd, 2017 16:13

when you love another
Rajkumar said:

Nicely expressed your thoughts

June 2nd, 2017 11:58

Beg me
alisha said:

i love your poems so much

June 2nd, 2017 11:54

when you love another
Louis Gibbs said:

Very well put together poem, mlh! Enjoyed it thoroughly.

June 2nd, 2017 10:31

when you love another
Augustus said:

Neat way to jab at the unfaithful lover. Love the sarcasm at the end.

June 2nd, 2017 10:11

when you love another
Goldfinch60 said:

Good love lorn write.

June 2nd, 2017 07:49

Don\'t bite your tongue
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

May 31st, 2017 01:42

Don\'t bite your tongue
Louis Gibbs said:

Masterful poem, indeed! Splendid, I would call it, mylittleheart.

May 30th, 2017 22:15

will you miss me?
Goldfinch60 said:

Good loving write.

May 30th, 2017 00:36

will you miss me?
swingline said:

Is something missing or simply lacking
Flagrant is the vagrant packing
Memories are the drops remaining
In a glass empty and so panging


May 29th, 2017 17:03

again
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GREAT ANALOGY MLH ~ Learning to SWIM and learning about LOVE. Whn you are in LOVE ~ drowning in emotion can be worse than drowning in water ! I know because I\'ve experienced both ! At least someone rescued me from drowning when i fell out of a BOAT ! Thanks for sharing ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN

December 6th, 2016 15:37

once again
Christina8 said:

MLH--Thinking of you--hoping things get better!! Christina

November 25th, 2016 13:40

once again
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 24th, 2016 12:46

once again
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh MY LITTLE HEART ~ It seems so so cruel that you should again be treated so so cruelly. We all love you ~ Thinking of you ~ praying for you ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B

November 24th, 2016 11:48

Breathing
Christina8 said:

Well done. Sorry your heart breaks.

November 18th, 2016 21:52

Breathing
Augustus said:

Hard to breath with a sucking chest wound. Sometimes fatal. Nice metaphor.

November 18th, 2016 20:46

Breathing
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 18th, 2016 17:08

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