Comments received on poems by mina94
My Brother From Another Mother
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MINA ~ Thank you for a very moving first poem . It is very ersonal and written in a flowwing prose style and yet replete with rhyme and rhythm. Step Brother % Sisters can be a great bleesing and I like your phrase \"BROTHER FROM ANOTHER MOTHER\" which adds poignancy to your poem. I trust you found writing this poem cathartic. I am pleased you have assurance inn your heart that your brother is in a better place. Thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN.
November 3rd, 2016 05:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MINA ~ Thank you for a very moving first poem . It is very ersonal and written in a flowwing prose style and yet replete with rhyme and rhythm. Step Brother % Sisters can be a great bleesing and I like your phrase \"BROTHER FROM ANOTHER MOTHER\" which adds poignancy to your poem. I trust you found writing this poem cathartic. I am pleased you have assurance inn your heart that your brother is in a better place. Thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN.
November 3rd, 2016 05:53
My Brother From Another Mother
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Aww so sorry for your step brother, how did he die? But your poem is moving and excellent in dirge like style and u wrote it in poetic rhyming and sentiments. ESP love the cake without frosting lines.
And like u said wisely he is in a beta place now pal. Thumbs up.
Pls do comment my latest poem here .
November 3rd, 2016 03:11
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Aww so sorry for your step brother, how did he die? But your poem is moving and excellent in dirge like style and u wrote it in poetic rhyming and sentiments. ESP love the cake without frosting lines.
And like u said wisely he is in a beta place now pal. Thumbs up.
Pls do comment my latest poem here .
November 3rd, 2016 03:11
