Broken Jigsaw piece
Tony36 said:

I\'ve been that jigsaw puzzle piece all my life. Great right

November 3rd, 2016 14:14

Broken Jigsaw piece
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME LISA # Love your poem and the song and the video ~ Thanks for sharing. None of us is perfect ~ but like you I try to fit in often unsuccessfully ~ but I dust myself down and look for another Jigsaw where i can be the perfect piece. The are two elements tio a good poem one uis the structure and the otyher is the content. I love the structure of your \"free verse poem\" and the repetition. The fact that almost every line begins ~ I AM THAT PIECE ~ gives it rhythm and great PERSONAL POWER.! YOU really are \"THAT PIECE\" ! The content is excellent (although rather sad) because it tells us exactly how YOU feel ! Thinking of you 24/7 I hope and pray things will improve. Thanks for sharing ~ I trust you found it CATHARTIC ~ more poems please ~ Yoiurs BRIAN ~ (UK)

November 3rd, 2016 10:21