Comments received on poems by larosamarchitada
I don’t wanna disappear forever, but right now I need to not be here
onepauly said:
if you really need one, take one. maybe another time you wont need it.
keep your faith.
and things change, I assure you
April 22nd, 2018 07:49
onepauly said:
if you really need one, take one. maybe another time you wont need it.
keep your faith.
and things change, I assure you
April 22nd, 2018 07:49
I don’t wanna disappear forever, but right now I need to not be here
orchidee said:
I see what you mean.
In a light vein: Erm, where are ya now then?! You here or there, or somewhere else?! Cooeee, you there?! heehee.
April 22nd, 2018 01:56
orchidee said:
I see what you mean.
In a light vein: Erm, where are ya now then?! You here or there, or somewhere else?! Cooeee, you there?! heehee.
April 22nd, 2018 01:56
Her In My Dreams
lea cobain . said:
your words are placed perfectly, love love this piece.
April 11th, 2018 02:12
lea cobain . said:
your words are placed perfectly, love love this piece.
April 11th, 2018 02:12
That play fighting shit gets to me
orchidee said:
Aww, why you no like that play-fighting ****?! heehee.
April 9th, 2018 01:45
orchidee said:
Aww, why you no like that play-fighting ****?! heehee.
April 9th, 2018 01:45
Te sueño cada noche
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS LAROSA Poe este POEMA ~ Beautifully written (a me gusta la lengua espanol) and with a very powerful love message ~ explaining why you dream of your LOVER every night ! Love the line \"When you saw me ~ You saw your dinner !\" I often feel I could eat ANGELA too ! Thanks for sharing ~ Hasta la Vista BRIAN ~ Por favor a visitar Mis Poemas ~ Gracias ~ B.
February 19th, 2018 03:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRACIAS LAROSA Poe este POEMA ~ Beautifully written (a me gusta la lengua espanol) and with a very powerful love message ~ explaining why you dream of your LOVER every night ! Love the line \"When you saw me ~ You saw your dinner !\" I often feel I could eat ANGELA too ! Thanks for sharing ~ Hasta la Vista BRIAN ~ Por favor a visitar Mis Poemas ~ Gracias ~ B.
February 19th, 2018 03:26
Te sueño cada noche
dusk arising said:
eth eth eth eth eth chris waddle, eth eth eth eth scorchio!
February 19th, 2018 03:13
dusk arising said:
eth eth eth eth eth chris waddle, eth eth eth eth scorchio!
February 19th, 2018 03:13
Tu Mujer (Your Woman)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HOLA LAROSA ~ Gracias por tu Poema muy interesante ! Describing a Woman your Man might enjoy is an interesting and sensuous topic for a poem ! A woman he could love ~ You could write mountains of what attracts him ~ But everyone is allured to HIM ! The last verse is very poignant \"You deserve everything ~ The best ~ True love ~ Good sex ! BUT the final line is the crux ~ ALTHOUGH SHE WILL NOT BE ME ! Thanks for sharing ~ Tu Amigo de MPS ~ BRIAN (UK) ~ Please check my Poems ~ GRACIAS B.
February 6th, 2018 17:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HOLA LAROSA ~ Gracias por tu Poema muy interesante ! Describing a Woman your Man might enjoy is an interesting and sensuous topic for a poem ! A woman he could love ~ You could write mountains of what attracts him ~ But everyone is allured to HIM ! The last verse is very poignant \"You deserve everything ~ The best ~ True love ~ Good sex ! BUT the final line is the crux ~ ALTHOUGH SHE WILL NOT BE ME ! Thanks for sharing ~ Tu Amigo de MPS ~ BRIAN (UK) ~ Please check my Poems ~ GRACIAS B.
February 6th, 2018 17:19
The Perfect Chocolate Cake
FredPeyer said:
The metaphor of chocolate cake is genius! Well penned, larosa!
December 11th, 2017 23:44
FredPeyer said:
The metaphor of chocolate cake is genius! Well penned, larosa!
December 11th, 2017 23:44
How it feels to overeat
FredPeyer said:
You do say a lot in these few lines, larosa! Very well penned. Love the line \'guilt shadows moments of weakness\'
December 11th, 2017 23:41
FredPeyer said:
You do say a lot in these few lines, larosa! Very well penned. Love the line \'guilt shadows moments of weakness\'
December 11th, 2017 23:41
The Perfect Chocolate Cake
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This one really wowed me...I love everything about it...look forward to reading more...take care and keep writing!!
November 18th, 2016 23:44
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This one really wowed me...I love everything about it...look forward to reading more...take care and keep writing!!
November 18th, 2016 23:44
The Perfect Chocolate Cake
Augustus said:
Si espera a la perfección podrás esperar un largo tiempo. Buen trabajo.
November 18th, 2016 20:40
Augustus said:
Si espera a la perfección podrás esperar un largo tiempo. Buen trabajo.
November 18th, 2016 20:40
Ten Paciencia Arbolito
Augustus said:
Me encanta la metáfora. Es una buena lección para los niños que crecen.
November 17th, 2016 17:57
Augustus said:
Me encanta la metáfora. Es una buena lección para los niños que crecen.
November 17th, 2016 17:57
A Flame en La Oscuridad
Augustus said:
Interesante la combinación de ingles y español. Me gusta el concepto que hay luz pero \"no veo el camino ya.\" Me gusta mucho su poesía.
November 8th, 2016 22:48
Augustus said:
Interesante la combinación de ingles y español. Me gusta el concepto que hay luz pero \"no veo el camino ya.\" Me gusta mucho su poesía.
November 8th, 2016 22:48
Wishful Thinking
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BUENAS NOCHES LAROSA ~ Gracias for your fist poem and welcome to MPS. I lovevthe pathos in your poem and all the quetions about the unfolding of your love that you pose and share ! Your \"free verse\" poem is throbbing with rhythm which adds \"piquante\" to your words. This is an exciting and enticing LOVE POEM that the recipient should ignore at his peril. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ mas por favoor ! BRIAN
November 7th, 2016 18:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BUENAS NOCHES LAROSA ~ Gracias for your fist poem and welcome to MPS. I lovevthe pathos in your poem and all the quetions about the unfolding of your love that you pose and share ! Your \"free verse\" poem is throbbing with rhythm which adds \"piquante\" to your words. This is an exciting and enticing LOVE POEM that the recipient should ignore at his peril. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ mas por favoor ! BRIAN
November 7th, 2016 18:22
