Comments received on poems by Monsters
Space
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent!!! La, and you are only twelve???? Beautifully depicted with the symbolism of stars and shore, the image is very fitting, and you wove it perfectly from start to finish.....all so perfectly love. Your use of rhyming as well as the rythm is great! I am impressed and quite enjoyed it.
February 4th, 2011 14:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent!!! La, and you are only twelve???? Beautifully depicted with the symbolism of stars and shore, the image is very fitting, and you wove it perfectly from start to finish.....all so perfectly love. Your use of rhyming as well as the rythm is great! I am impressed and quite enjoyed it.
February 4th, 2011 14:35
Life's A Game
Cheeky Missy said:
Short and succinct? Your image is very fitting, the title perfect....altogether you did very well...excellent!!! But it isn't really so much a game, when we are held responsible for our actions, you know?
February 3rd, 2011 23:55
Cheeky Missy said:
Short and succinct? Your image is very fitting, the title perfect....altogether you did very well...excellent!!! But it isn't really so much a game, when we are held responsible for our actions, you know?
February 3rd, 2011 23:55
