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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME CP ~ Your first poem proves you are not clumsy but a Delicate Poet. Repetition in alternate lines and a consistent rhyme in lines 2 4 6 8 ~ very elegant structure. The message is clear and plain a desire to be reunited with your LOVER ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ BRIAN

November 11th, 2016 16:41

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Christina8 said:

Welcome to MPS! Well done first poem! I like the repitition of \'he is the ocean\' . I think you did a very good job here. Thanks for sharing!

November 11th, 2016 13:51