Comments received on poems by Akai
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME AKAI ~ Thanks for a very very emotional first poem. I agree with ELEGANT ~ it is amazing ! For me it sumarises the feelings stirred in me \"By all the GIRLS I\'ve ever known\" All my encounters have left me richer and much wiser and when GOD created Eve his Paradise on earth was complete. I\'ve been kniocked down but never knocked out and I\'m always (like the Fool on the Hill) ready for the next Beautiful Lady that crosses my path ! The secret is AKAI is to never be DEFEATED ~ Please check my poems ~ Yours BRIAN
November 26th, 2016 06:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME AKAI ~ Thanks for a very very emotional first poem. I agree with ELEGANT ~ it is amazing ! For me it sumarises the feelings stirred in me \"By all the GIRLS I\'ve ever known\" All my encounters have left me richer and much wiser and when GOD created Eve his Paradise on earth was complete. I\'ve been kniocked down but never knocked out and I\'m always (like the Fool on the Hill) ready for the next Beautiful Lady that crosses my path ! The secret is AKAI is to never be DEFEATED ~ Please check my poems ~ Yours BRIAN
November 26th, 2016 06:32
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Elegant_Style said:
Wowowowowow!!! This is so amazing and I cannot even write how much emotion you have put into your poem. It is so great and I don\'t even have words to describe!! Keep Writing!!
November 25th, 2016 22:57
Elegant_Style said:
Wowowowowow!!! This is so amazing and I cannot even write how much emotion you have put into your poem. It is so great and I don\'t even have words to describe!! Keep Writing!!
November 25th, 2016 22:57
