Comments received on poems by BethaneyLouise



Conflicting
Tony36 said:

Yes very much so, Great write

December 1st, 2016 11:48

Conflicting
willyweed said:

I agree with Brian, this is clever and insightful. ww

December 1st, 2016 11:10

Conflicting
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

YES BETHANY ~ and (just between you and I) it gets worse as you get older ! Thanks for sharing ~ Hugs BRIAN

December 1st, 2016 09:54

unfamiliarity
Tony36 said:

Write from the heart
speak from the heart
Great write

November 29th, 2016 18:19

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Yorke said:

I think this is a well written and expressed piece. Since most of us are writing to express thoughts and feelings I do not think any of us need improvement. I don\'t see it as right or wrong but more so whether we feel can convey a message, you have done that well.

November 29th, 2016 15:50

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME BETHANEY (lovely name ~ lovely picture) Thanks for a very elegant first poem in both structure and subject ! It has great rhythm (modern poems do not have to rhyme !) It poses an interesting juxtaposition of existence and non~existence. I like the concept of the last line \"Breaking out of my own imagination\" excellent. Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ YOURS BRIAN !

November 29th, 2016 14:32