Comments received on poems by poetlife
Breathing
Elegant_Style said:
this is great!!!! it is painfully sad, yes, but it also shows how deep writing can be
December 4th, 2016 17:19
Elegant_Style said:
this is great!!!! it is painfully sad, yes, but it also shows how deep writing can be
December 4th, 2016 17:19
Breathing
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME GEM ~ You always need inspiration for a poem and you ure got yours ! Dying can be painful (I was once pulled fro a wimming pool and had to be pumped out) ~ we can only last about 3 minutes without breathing. You have captured the feeling well. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
December 4th, 2016 09:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME GEM ~ You always need inspiration for a poem and you ure got yours ! Dying can be painful (I was once pulled fro a wimming pool and had to be pumped out) ~ we can only last about 3 minutes without breathing. You have captured the feeling well. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
December 4th, 2016 09:27
Breathing
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow this is super, u write well at your young age. The rhyme scheme is excellent. Fine poetic musing , and metaphors too.
U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too . I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it. Pls don\'t forget to comment.
December 4th, 2016 07:25
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow this is super, u write well at your young age. The rhyme scheme is excellent. Fine poetic musing , and metaphors too.
U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too . I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it. Pls don\'t forget to comment.
December 4th, 2016 07:25
