Comments received on poems by Hairbi
Broken Men on Broken Paths
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HAIRBI for 40 very challenging lines of \"Introspective Beat Poetry\" Thanks for sharing ! \"We all crawl a cracked and broken path ~ Confusion will be our epitaph ~ If we make it we can all sit back and laff ~ But I think tomorrow we\'ll all be cryin\' \" Yours BRIAN
December 20th, 2016 16:07
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HAIRBI for 40 very challenging lines of \"Introspective Beat Poetry\" Thanks for sharing ! \"We all crawl a cracked and broken path ~ Confusion will be our epitaph ~ If we make it we can all sit back and laff ~ But I think tomorrow we\'ll all be cryin\' \" Yours BRIAN
December 20th, 2016 16:07
The Once-Full Soul
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME HAIRBI ~ Thanks for a very challenging first poem. The contents of my SOUL is dynamic and ideas ~ thoughts ~ attitudes etc move in and out and replace each other. It is generally HALF-FULL but never EMPTY and yet never completely empty. Never CLOSE your SOUL to LIFE or LOVE # keep it open and you will be surprised at what pops in ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
December 16th, 2016 11:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME HAIRBI ~ Thanks for a very challenging first poem. The contents of my SOUL is dynamic and ideas ~ thoughts ~ attitudes etc move in and out and replace each other. It is generally HALF-FULL but never EMPTY and yet never completely empty. Never CLOSE your SOUL to LIFE or LOVE # keep it open and you will be surprised at what pops in ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
December 16th, 2016 11:04
