Comments received on poems by XxRaavenSairasxX
No Pennies For My Tale
WriteBeLight said:
I have met people like this. They are never happy and always like to stir the pot. That is what I got from your poem. Great work!
December 17th, 2016 05:19
WriteBeLight said:
I have met people like this. They are never happy and always like to stir the pot. That is what I got from your poem. Great work!
December 17th, 2016 05:19
No Pennies For My Tale
myinnervoice said:
You have a way with words that invokes a very physical and visceral response. I like it(think i misspelled that)
December 17th, 2016 02:08
myinnervoice said:
You have a way with words that invokes a very physical and visceral response. I like it(think i misspelled that)
December 17th, 2016 02:08
I Know Not
myinnervoice said:
It speaks to the duality of humanity, or at least my own. The constant contradiction of your wants and desires, and the frustration in not being able to truly express yourself or said desires. Or maybe im reading my own meaning into this, either way i enjoyed it and it made me feel a little less alone in life. So thank you.
December 17th, 2016 01:37
myinnervoice said:
It speaks to the duality of humanity, or at least my own. The constant contradiction of your wants and desires, and the frustration in not being able to truly express yourself or said desires. Or maybe im reading my own meaning into this, either way i enjoyed it and it made me feel a little less alone in life. So thank you.
December 17th, 2016 01:37
No Pennies For My Tale
Daniel said:
I\'m glad you did share, this is a really great poem!
December 17th, 2016 01:08
Daniel said:
I\'m glad you did share, this is a really great poem!
December 17th, 2016 01:08
I Know Not
MaxWritesPoems said:
I love this so much, it truly is beautiful.
December 16th, 2016 21:42
MaxWritesPoems said:
I love this so much, it truly is beautiful.
December 16th, 2016 21:42
I Know Not
Augustus said:
I like the way this reads in an effortless way. The contradictions. Love me. Hate me. Reminds me of how often I\'ve been puzzled by the opposite sex. Welcome.
December 16th, 2016 16:02
Augustus said:
I like the way this reads in an effortless way. The contradictions. Love me. Hate me. Reminds me of how often I\'ve been puzzled by the opposite sex. Welcome.
December 16th, 2016 16:02
I Know Not
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME RAAVEN ~ Thanks for a very interesting and enigmatic first poem ! So so many request in your poem ~ some of which are contradictory. We all want our minds and senses stimulated by those who cross our paths ~ Touched ~ Teased ~ Refreshed ~ Taught ~ etc BUT perhaps not to be deceived ~ scorned ~ hated ? I find as I go through life that i am also faced with all these (sometimes conflicting) responses ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN (UK)
December 16th, 2016 11:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME RAAVEN ~ Thanks for a very interesting and enigmatic first poem ! So so many request in your poem ~ some of which are contradictory. We all want our minds and senses stimulated by those who cross our paths ~ Touched ~ Teased ~ Refreshed ~ Taught ~ etc BUT perhaps not to be deceived ~ scorned ~ hated ? I find as I go through life that i am also faced with all these (sometimes conflicting) responses ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN (UK)
December 16th, 2016 11:27
