Comments received on poems by SilentMew
Done Breathing Now
Augustus said:
You are expressing poor esteem, rejection and depression in an elegant lovely manner. If this poem reflects your true state I hope you reach out for help. Hugs.
January 9th, 2017 08:25
Augustus said:
You are expressing poor esteem, rejection and depression in an elegant lovely manner. If this poem reflects your true state I hope you reach out for help. Hugs.
January 9th, 2017 08:25
If I have to, I can.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MEW ~ Thank you for a very elegant but poignant first poem. It was a challenge to us all about how we treat those we profess to Love. There are so many levels of love and we all seek for True Symbiotic Love when two do actually become one. There are some perfect lines in your poem which say it all \"I will throw away your paper mat butterfly ~ That i thought to myself i would keep it to smile ~ until the day i die\". We hae all done that ~ but perhaps sometimes regretted it ? You will find MPS a very supportive site ~ Thanks for sharing~ BRIAN (UK). Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.
January 8th, 2017 05:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MEW ~ Thank you for a very elegant but poignant first poem. It was a challenge to us all about how we treat those we profess to Love. There are so many levels of love and we all seek for True Symbiotic Love when two do actually become one. There are some perfect lines in your poem which say it all \"I will throw away your paper mat butterfly ~ That i thought to myself i would keep it to smile ~ until the day i die\". We hae all done that ~ but perhaps sometimes regretted it ? You will find MPS a very supportive site ~ Thanks for sharing~ BRIAN (UK). Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.
January 8th, 2017 05:06
