Comments received on poems by TaylorLaane



The Heart Beat That Never Ends
willyweed said:

this flows from the river of truth!
wonderful work. ww

December 28th, 2016 19:35

Where Are You Now
Daniel said:

A sad but beautifully written poem!

December 23rd, 2016 21:58

Where Are You Now
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME TAYLOR ~ Thanks for a beautifully written poem ~ replete with rhyme and rhythm ~ BUT ~ the beauty is eclipsed by the sadness of the subject. Loss of contact with a loved one through divorce. My folks are still together but I work with Young People and I know the anguish they go through when they lose contact with one of their parents through divorce. The whole of the UK is only one quarter the size of Texas so after divorce each parent lives relatively close. Girls nearly always stay wih their Mom so it is the very important Dad / Daughter bond that is separated. Thanks for sharing ~ hope it helped ~ this is a very empathetic site. Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN


December 23rd, 2016 15:51