Comments received on poems by hollyrice
Matilda
Anna said:
Oh gosh O_O
I'm not gonna drink anymore pop, or else MY tummy will pop.... OUCH
lol :)
June 4th, 2011 16:47
Anna said:
Oh gosh O_O
I'm not gonna drink anymore pop, or else MY tummy will pop.... OUCH
lol :)
June 4th, 2011 16:47
Pete GOBBLEDEEGOOK
Anna said:
This poem makes me laugh! It makes absolutely no sense, but it's super funny!!!
June 4th, 2011 16:46
Anna said:
This poem makes me laugh! It makes absolutely no sense, but it's super funny!!!
June 4th, 2011 16:46
Holly (by the way that is atualy my name!)
Anna said:
You write really clever poems. The way you organize them is super cool
June 4th, 2011 16:44
Anna said:
You write really clever poems. The way you organize them is super cool
June 4th, 2011 16:44
Holly (by the way that is atualy my name!)
Cheeky Missy said:
Gladly. I enjoyed this little piece about arbitrary Holly....did she really lose her dolly for good, or did Polly really retrieve and return it to her? Your use of end-rhyming is excellent, and the entire poem was pleasant reading. I enjoyed it. P.S. Check your 10th line and maybe remove either the "that" OR "the"? And check the spelling of "actually" in the title.
February 26th, 2011 00:37
Cheeky Missy said:
Gladly. I enjoyed this little piece about arbitrary Holly....did she really lose her dolly for good, or did Polly really retrieve and return it to her? Your use of end-rhyming is excellent, and the entire poem was pleasant reading. I enjoyed it. P.S. Check your 10th line and maybe remove either the "that" OR "the"? And check the spelling of "actually" in the title.
February 26th, 2011 00:37
Rose
Anna said:
I really love this poem!!! It's so funny! Although, the brain was surprising.... lol. =^.^=
February 25th, 2011 16:48
Anna said:
I really love this poem!!! It's so funny! Although, the brain was surprising.... lol. =^.^=
February 25th, 2011 16:48
Pete GOBBLEDEEGOOK
Cheeky Missy said:
Your end-rhyming is GREAT! And it is certainly a very nonsensical piece. Poor Pete that he has such an odd mother.
February 23rd, 2011 00:36
Cheeky Missy said:
Your end-rhyming is GREAT! And it is certainly a very nonsensical piece. Poor Pete that he has such an odd mother.
February 23rd, 2011 00:36
Matilda
Cheeky Missy said:
OH my word! Poor Matilda! She died for her folly? La, that is very sad....a serious lesson to all the rest of us not only to avoid drinking too much pop, but also to avoid overindulgence in anything, lest we be destroyed by it! Thanks again I liked it! Also see I've rated it, okay?
February 21st, 2011 14:33
Cheeky Missy said:
OH my word! Poor Matilda! She died for her folly? La, that is very sad....a serious lesson to all the rest of us not only to avoid drinking too much pop, but also to avoid overindulgence in anything, lest we be destroyed by it! Thanks again I liked it! Also see I've rated it, okay?
February 21st, 2011 14:33
Rose
hollyrice said:
rate my poem and be my friend i do not know how to get friends!!
February 21st, 2011 07:39
hollyrice said:
rate my poem and be my friend i do not know how to get friends!!
February 21st, 2011 07:39
Matilda
hollyrice said:
Rate my poem and be my friend. i do not know how to get them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
February 21st, 2011 07:38
hollyrice said:
Rate my poem and be my friend. i do not know how to get them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
February 21st, 2011 07:38
Matilda
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmmm. Rather intriguing. What happened to poor Matty/Tilly after she drank it all?
February 21st, 2011 00:23
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmmm. Rather intriguing. What happened to poor Matty/Tilly after she drank it all?
February 21st, 2011 00:23
Rose
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Nasty fate for poor Rose.....funny thing is, why didn't she lose it last time she had a cold and need to sneeze and etc? Your end-rhyming is good and the rythm fairly good too. Very interesting read.
February 20th, 2011 00:06
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Nasty fate for poor Rose.....funny thing is, why didn't she lose it last time she had a cold and need to sneeze and etc? Your end-rhyming is good and the rythm fairly good too. Very interesting read.
February 20th, 2011 00:06
