Comments received on poems by Tony Grannell
The Abortion
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! This one graphic, raw, hard hitting in its explicit imagery paints a gory literal picture and sends a strong message but may also be metaphoric of all of mans unwanted pregnancies of thought and their eradication in brutal forms. This one so well written a fave
April 23rd, 2025 07:26
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! This one graphic, raw, hard hitting in its explicit imagery paints a gory literal picture and sends a strong message but may also be metaphoric of all of mans unwanted pregnancies of thought and their eradication in brutal forms. This one so well written a fave
April 23rd, 2025 07:26
The Stained Silk Dress
Doggerel Dave said:
Thoroughly enjoyed that excursion into high tea and taste. Now please locate the boar and employ it to finish the job……
April 22nd, 2025 21:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Thoroughly enjoyed that excursion into high tea and taste. Now please locate the boar and employ it to finish the job……
April 22nd, 2025 21:11
The Rover\'s Song
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m a readin\' great verse an rhyme there, faved for future savourin\'
April 22nd, 2025 20:43
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m a readin\' great verse an rhyme there, faved for future savourin\'
April 22nd, 2025 20:43
The Rover\'s Song
sorenbarrett said:
The process of life and death all contained in this poem. Lovely
April 22nd, 2025 13:18
sorenbarrett said:
The process of life and death all contained in this poem. Lovely
April 22nd, 2025 13:18
Go Tell the Greek
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re downright hilarious yet oh! So delightfully capable in a trice, dancing in a measured rhythm down the page with quatrains winking every moment until I\'m tickled whilst imbibing your tale. Too beautifully rendered with gorgeous imagery and a lovely poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love it!
April 21st, 2025 18:11
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re downright hilarious yet oh! So delightfully capable in a trice, dancing in a measured rhythm down the page with quatrains winking every moment until I\'m tickled whilst imbibing your tale. Too beautifully rendered with gorgeous imagery and a lovely poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love it!
April 21st, 2025 18:11
Go Tell the Greek
sorenbarrett said:
This poem\'s style fits its subject and the end gives reference to its beginning making it complete in is Odyssean journey. A lovely write of knowledge gained by experience and age. Your words are well crafted and framed in teak. A very classically artful poem that seems to have walked in out of a past era. Loved it
April 21st, 2025 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
This poem\'s style fits its subject and the end gives reference to its beginning making it complete in is Odyssean journey. A lovely write of knowledge gained by experience and age. Your words are well crafted and framed in teak. A very classically artful poem that seems to have walked in out of a past era. Loved it
April 21st, 2025 05:50
The Dream
teardrop said:
Smiles! This was penned so perfect you could not help but smile. Very clever write.
April 21st, 2025 05:04
teardrop said:
Smiles! This was penned so perfect you could not help but smile. Very clever write.
April 21st, 2025 05:04
The Dream
jarcher54 said:
I recall some of your work from years ago... please don\'t go away so long! I was beginning to think you were \"never there\"!
Your tight little pieces are fun and witty and then, after you let them sink in, pretty profound!
April 20th, 2025 19:10
jarcher54 said:
I recall some of your work from years ago... please don\'t go away so long! I was beginning to think you were \"never there\"!
Your tight little pieces are fun and witty and then, after you let them sink in, pretty profound!
April 20th, 2025 19:10
The Dream
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and well said in good rhyme. Loved the idea and poem
April 20th, 2025 11:31
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and well said in good rhyme. Loved the idea and poem
April 20th, 2025 11:31
Dead Men and Butterflies
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write, enjoyed
April 20th, 2025 11:00
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write, enjoyed
April 20th, 2025 11:00
My Man
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...took [you] an age to [pen]--\" did this? But oh! It\'s so very beautiful with a rollicking sense of rhythm and heartening good sense, as if in truth spoken by the \"common\" man/woman. Charmingly rendered with exquisite imagery and a waltzing poignancy, thank you very much for sharing, I love it.
April 16th, 2025 14:11
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...took [you] an age to [pen]--\" did this? But oh! It\'s so very beautiful with a rollicking sense of rhythm and heartening good sense, as if in truth spoken by the \"common\" man/woman. Charmingly rendered with exquisite imagery and a waltzing poignancy, thank you very much for sharing, I love it.
April 16th, 2025 14:11
The Stained Silk Dress
sorenbarrett said:
Now I felt that I had just read a Dickens or Tolstoy novel. The descriptions were as impeccable as its subject and the images painted were from the classical era of painting. So well worded that it was hard to put down. Lovely with a great ending as well
April 16th, 2025 13:40
sorenbarrett said:
Now I felt that I had just read a Dickens or Tolstoy novel. The descriptions were as impeccable as its subject and the images painted were from the classical era of painting. So well worded that it was hard to put down. Lovely with a great ending as well
April 16th, 2025 13:40
The Stained Silk Dress
Cheeky Missy said:
Poor lady. Nothing lasts forever, which we mutually hate and love, as some things can\'t end soon enough while others can never last forever. Poetic indeed, whilst seeming prose, burgeoned with such decadent vocabulary one must swoon, the tale is a haunting metaphor applicable to more than one instance. Excellently rendered with delicious details and piercing imagery, its poignancy is weighty. Thank you for sharing.
April 16th, 2025 13:16
Cheeky Missy said:
Poor lady. Nothing lasts forever, which we mutually hate and love, as some things can\'t end soon enough while others can never last forever. Poetic indeed, whilst seeming prose, burgeoned with such decadent vocabulary one must swoon, the tale is a haunting metaphor applicable to more than one instance. Excellently rendered with delicious details and piercing imagery, its poignancy is weighty. Thank you for sharing.
April 16th, 2025 13:16
Bayou Blue
Poetic Licence said:
Now that is something different to read and enjoy, a love story with a darker side, love the wording used and it flows really nicely, very enjoyable read
April 13th, 2025 13:19
Poetic Licence said:
Now that is something different to read and enjoy, a love story with a darker side, love the wording used and it flows really nicely, very enjoyable read
April 13th, 2025 13:19
Bayou Blue
Cheeky Missy said:
Whoa! This is akin to a breath of fresh air in its delicious rhythm and rollicking as the lines trip sweetly down the page as if breathing life into this genre. Gorgeously rendered with exceptional imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you, thank you for sharing. I love it!
April 13th, 2025 12:16
Cheeky Missy said:
Whoa! This is akin to a breath of fresh air in its delicious rhythm and rollicking as the lines trip sweetly down the page as if breathing life into this genre. Gorgeously rendered with exceptional imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you, thank you for sharing. I love it!
April 13th, 2025 12:16
Bayou Blue
sorenbarrett said:
A murder love story as I take it. Creepy, haunting and a great story told in good jargon. Well written a fave
April 13th, 2025 11:44
sorenbarrett said:
A murder love story as I take it. Creepy, haunting and a great story told in good jargon. Well written a fave
April 13th, 2025 11:44
My Man
Poetic Licence said:
That is such an honest and open but beautiful write, wonderful declaration of ongoing love and total appreciation for there loved one, wonderfully written, enjoyed the read
April 11th, 2025 02:10
Poetic Licence said:
That is such an honest and open but beautiful write, wonderful declaration of ongoing love and total appreciation for there loved one, wonderfully written, enjoyed the read
April 11th, 2025 02:10
My Man
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is what I call love and that is what I call a beautiful poem so raw and gritty yet full of the real and no sugar coating. The wording is worthy of the poem so in character. This is an uncommon poem for the common man and woman. It leaves me with a feeling of honesty, and sincerity that goes into the poetic. Absolutely loved this poem a definite fave Congratulations on such a write
April 10th, 2025 16:22
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is what I call love and that is what I call a beautiful poem so raw and gritty yet full of the real and no sugar coating. The wording is worthy of the poem so in character. This is an uncommon poem for the common man and woman. It leaves me with a feeling of honesty, and sincerity that goes into the poetic. Absolutely loved this poem a definite fave Congratulations on such a write
April 10th, 2025 16:22
Stay Home
Poetic Licence said:
A strong message of the stupidity of war, many of those who fight them have no idea what they are for and lose there lives for nothing, well written write
April 6th, 2025 02:31
Poetic Licence said:
A strong message of the stupidity of war, many of those who fight them have no idea what they are for and lose there lives for nothing, well written write
April 6th, 2025 02:31
Stay Home
sorenbarrett said:
Anti war I\'m all for. This poem speaks to the silliness of war and how thousands heed the call of country and God to fight and die for nothing. It is sad and poignant and warns against taking up guns for folly. Well done nicely rhymed and composed it sings out.
April 5th, 2025 15:46
sorenbarrett said:
Anti war I\'m all for. This poem speaks to the silliness of war and how thousands heed the call of country and God to fight and die for nothing. It is sad and poignant and warns against taking up guns for folly. Well done nicely rhymed and composed it sings out.
April 5th, 2025 15:46
Unknown
arqios said:
You definitely have a way with words! A swagging lyric that flows like the tides, quite powerful 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 9th, 2025 05:50
arqios said:
You definitely have a way with words! A swagging lyric that flows like the tides, quite powerful 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 9th, 2025 05:50
Yorick’s Skull
arqios said:
To be or to be forgot! Tony, that brought to mind an archeological dig and how if one were cremated nothing would there be to exhume and indeed truly forgotten save for the ash that would have long since been returned to the material of the earth which would surely be dug past. Through bones, forensics would say, the dead speak, however humourlessly, we could presume. A poem thick in thought. Loved it. Thanks for keeping it up here. Rik.
September 22nd, 2022 20:35
arqios said:
To be or to be forgot! Tony, that brought to mind an archeological dig and how if one were cremated nothing would there be to exhume and indeed truly forgotten save for the ash that would have long since been returned to the material of the earth which would surely be dug past. Through bones, forensics would say, the dead speak, however humourlessly, we could presume. A poem thick in thought. Loved it. Thanks for keeping it up here. Rik.
September 22nd, 2022 20:35
Old Poet
arqios said:
Both moving and stirring in the same breath. Thanks for sharing.
September 21st, 2022 16:56
arqios said:
Both moving and stirring in the same breath. Thanks for sharing.
September 21st, 2022 16:56
Dead Men and Butterflies
Christina8 said:
This is a beautiful write. Wonderful rhyme and rhythm,
March 15th, 2017 09:09
Christina8 said:
This is a beautiful write. Wonderful rhyme and rhythm,
March 15th, 2017 09:09
Yorick’s Skull
Tony36 said:
Alas poor Yorick I new him well, we used to go bowling on Friday. Great write
March 14th, 2017 08:14
Tony36 said:
Alas poor Yorick I new him well, we used to go bowling on Friday. Great write
March 14th, 2017 08:14
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