Lack of Mind, Passive Heart
Projectbeing said:

Welcome, love the poem, its a beautiful contrast to a piece that I wrote about a confession

January 5th, 2017 21:45

Lack of Mind, Passive Heart
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME DEJANE ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ it is enigmatic in its presentation ~ but there is a lot of EXPRESSIONISM in it ! Love is always complex and (in my experience) \"revisited love\" is even more complex. We all have desires and we all crave affection and we expect our love to be reciprocated. As we go through life (I\'m 33) we experience agony and ecstasy and we all come close to the edge and endure rejection ~ but can we ever go back ? In essence we all crave commitment and happily ever after ~ it happens to others ~ why doesn\'t it happen to me ? Men can mature but it happens very slowly (compared with Ladies) but sometimes never ~ as you may have experienced ! The ending is positive ~ please keep your love ~ BURNING. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN (UK).

January 5th, 2017 18:28