Comments received on poems by CaitEva
Run and you\'ll get burned.
BeckyJo said:
Interesting reasoning! I enjoyed this poem!
February 11th, 2017 11:16
BeckyJo said:
Interesting reasoning! I enjoyed this poem!
February 11th, 2017 11:16
Unwritten words.
Edthepoet said:
This is a great write, especially the last line, awesome imagery. There\'s real melody through your words.
February 5th, 2017 13:51
Edthepoet said:
This is a great write, especially the last line, awesome imagery. There\'s real melody through your words.
February 5th, 2017 13:51
Dark world.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing & caring LARA. I agree that \"Life was made to Love\" and you have had you share ! But for me LOVING is a shared experience so lay back and think of me sometime ! Love BRIAN. Please check my poems and thanks for adding to my FUSION ~ B
February 4th, 2017 09:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing & caring LARA. I agree that \"Life was made to Love\" and you have had you share ! But for me LOVING is a shared experience so lay back and think of me sometime ! Love BRIAN. Please check my poems and thanks for adding to my FUSION ~ B
February 4th, 2017 09:17
Dark world.
willyweed said:
I see you have read the bad news
from front to back and cover to cover you drank to much and played the game of the loose and drunken lover welcome to the club
but even the most causal observer
will most certainly agree that~that is not the right for such a beautiful women such as thee ! so in the end if you need a real friend consider ww and just maybe we will really help one each to the other. choose friends wisely something you have failed to do in the pass if you don\'t care to hear me just say the word and will your wish your dream do come true and I will no longer talk with you but if you will dare I will take much care for I know your state is fragile . I will say no more now I\'ll head for door and wish sweet dreams 4U. ww please in your good time send me a sign.
February 2nd, 2017 03:58
willyweed said:
I see you have read the bad news
from front to back and cover to cover you drank to much and played the game of the loose and drunken lover welcome to the club
but even the most causal observer
will most certainly agree that~that is not the right for such a beautiful women such as thee ! so in the end if you need a real friend consider ww and just maybe we will really help one each to the other. choose friends wisely something you have failed to do in the pass if you don\'t care to hear me just say the word and will your wish your dream do come true and I will no longer talk with you but if you will dare I will take much care for I know your state is fragile . I will say no more now I\'ll head for door and wish sweet dreams 4U. ww please in your good time send me a sign.
February 2nd, 2017 03:58
Seeds of the soul influenced by ego.
willyweed said:
I see you are a competitor very nice work
January 31st, 2017 23:05
willyweed said:
I see you are a competitor very nice work
January 31st, 2017 23:05
Dark world.
Shakerite said:
Lara . I\'m glad you escaped the jungle and joined the land of the free .
Saw the poignancy of your message .
January 27th, 2017 23:43
Shakerite said:
Lara . I\'m glad you escaped the jungle and joined the land of the free .
Saw the poignancy of your message .
January 27th, 2017 23:43
Liquid earth.
Jarid said:
I love this! Going by a lake or any body of water works wonders for me as well. Great job!
January 19th, 2017 20:11
Jarid said:
I love this! Going by a lake or any body of water works wonders for me as well. Great job!
January 19th, 2017 20:11
The chauvinistic mystic.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
CAITLIN ~ Thank you for sharing this very elegant POEM. It is classical artistically (perfect visual) ~ sensuous structurally (love the Pink / Black alternation) ~ intellectual linguistically ~ WOW. All intellectuals aspire to higher consciousness ~ we all want to be Mystics ! BUT as you say there are constraints. Chauvinism is one of them ~ as are arrogance ~ narcissism and pessimism. I too try to be holistic and optimistic (which is reflected in my poetry). Also ~ like yourself ~ Random Men (and Women !) are anathema ! Thanks for caring ~ it made me think ! Yours BRIAN
January 12th, 2017 07:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
CAITLIN ~ Thank you for sharing this very elegant POEM. It is classical artistically (perfect visual) ~ sensuous structurally (love the Pink / Black alternation) ~ intellectual linguistically ~ WOW. All intellectuals aspire to higher consciousness ~ we all want to be Mystics ! BUT as you say there are constraints. Chauvinism is one of them ~ as are arrogance ~ narcissism and pessimism. I too try to be holistic and optimistic (which is reflected in my poetry). Also ~ like yourself ~ Random Men (and Women !) are anathema ! Thanks for caring ~ it made me think ! Yours BRIAN
January 12th, 2017 07:16
Lower planes of life.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing LARA ~ it is true what you say that LOWER PLANE PEOPLE ~ do feel shame and are often unaware that they are to blame for their status quo. In my experience there is no \"inner\" happiness in \"externals\" any happiness is superficial. The only way to true release and true happiness is to aspire to Higher Planes but it\'s never easy ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
January 11th, 2017 15:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing LARA ~ it is true what you say that LOWER PLANE PEOPLE ~ do feel shame and are often unaware that they are to blame for their status quo. In my experience there is no \"inner\" happiness in \"externals\" any happiness is superficial. The only way to true release and true happiness is to aspire to Higher Planes but it\'s never easy ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
January 11th, 2017 15:51
Control the vibe.
Augustus said:
Strange how we end up that way. But it\'s scary when the vibe speaks of revolution, which is what it may take. Enjoyed.
January 9th, 2017 16:43
Augustus said:
Strange how we end up that way. But it\'s scary when the vibe speaks of revolution, which is what it may take. Enjoyed.
January 9th, 2017 16:43
Stationed at a vibe.
WriteBeLight said:
Oh! I feel what you are saying in your poem. My heart aches. Good job in the writing!
January 8th, 2017 16:54
WriteBeLight said:
Oh! I feel what you are saying in your poem. My heart aches. Good job in the writing!
January 8th, 2017 16:54
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