Comments received on poems by laralove



A deep channeling
Claudelle DeLuna said:

So Beautiful!
Thanks for sharing!
*C ✌

August 6th, 2019 18:06

Sugar daddy
FredPeyer said:

Laralove, your poem lays the truth right into the open. I like how it flows with an actually unexpected ending, which is also a new beginning. Very nice!

August 3rd, 2017 21:41

Part alienated, part connected.
onepauly said:

that was for lara love

July 19th, 2017 22:44

Part alienated, part connected.
onepauly said:

I don\'t know what I was thinking. sorry

July 19th, 2017 22:23

Part alienated, part connected.
onepauly said:

good for the people on CSI

July 19th, 2017 21:36

Part alienated, part connected.
Louis Gibbs said:

A very deep and philosophical poem, laralove! Tremendous insights portrayed and revealed. Congratulations on this amazing piece!

July 19th, 2017 21:26

Part alienated, part connected.
Gary Edward Geraci said:

This poem aims for truth; the Great story of Creation; Genesis. Nice visual imagery conjured up in your writing.

July 19th, 2017 20:21

An individual in a collective sea.
Louis Gibbs said:

I admire the depth expressed in this poem. Excellent, thoughtful piece, laralove!

July 18th, 2017 22:25

We\'re all under a spell.
Q said:

Excellent usage of occult! When we open our eyes, and truly see, the connection to the world around us becomes obvious. We are destroying ourselves by severing our connections with nature.

July 18th, 2017 17:49

An individual in a collective sea.
Q said:

well done! This has a depth to it that opens the mind.

July 18th, 2017 17:45

We\'re all under a spell.
Poetic Dan said:

.... And the comment to follow up.

Artless art\" is an artistic process within the artist; it\'s meaning is \"art of the soul.\" - Bruce Lee.

July 18th, 2017 17:08

Authenticity dead no knowledge of self.
Poetic Dan said:

Ooooo you are good! Pen warrior indeed, will write poetry wiser than the enemy will ever be.
Carry on being you!

July 18th, 2017 17:04

Part of an infinite mind chain
Poetic Dan said:

Wow, that\'s so good after reading the last one....I\'m nearly speechless but I\'m holding my tongue and I\'ll just read on


July 18th, 2017 17:00

An individual in a collective sea.
Poetic Dan said:

This sings with every word
The feeling of connection
So beautifully done
You\'ve answered my thoughts
Without knowing the question
What truth is in the rest of your work
I hope to see more after this treasure

July 18th, 2017 16:55

An individual in a collective sea.
onepauly said:

together we stand and stand again. great work!

July 18th, 2017 16:38

Part of an infinite mind chain
LAWLESS said:

I do live by my own truth as all should. This is an excellent poem.

June 3rd, 2017 16:53

Authenticity dead no knowledge of self.
Louis Gibbs said:

I\'m not sure even esoteric knowledge is a way out of what we have created, assuming a way out is needed. I like your poem, laralove.

May 29th, 2017 18:43

Authenticity dead no knowledge of self.
swingline said:

We all are slaves to one of two masters . One is Heavenly and the other is matter . One is forever the other will our ashes scatter .

May 29th, 2017 16:51

We\'re all under a spell.
swingline said:

I\'m doubtful of the direction that the occult offers .

May 24th, 2017 12:08

Releasing.
NikitaPassmore said:

I relate to this poem it is so meaningful

May 19th, 2017 20:11

Alchemy
Frank Prem said:

Quite a conundrum Lara. Good write

May 2nd, 2017 02:37

Run and you\'ll get burned.
Francesco said:

I can relate to the struggle with unpleasant, obsessive thoughts.
It really seems impossible to run from them, much like a little demon that cannot be ignored! :) (I invite you to read my poem \"The Demon\", you might enjoy it).
Excellent write! :) x

February 14th, 2017 09:58

Run and you\'ll get burned.
BeckyJo said:

Interesting reasoning! I enjoyed this poem!

February 11th, 2017 11:16

head in the clouds
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write

February 6th, 2017 09:39

Unwritten words.
Edthepoet said:

This is a great write, especially the last line, awesome imagery. There\'s real melody through your words.

February 5th, 2017 13:51

Dark world.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing & caring LARA. I agree that \"Life was made to Love\" and you have had you share ! But for me LOVING is a shared experience so lay back and think of me sometime ! Love BRIAN. Please check my poems and thanks for adding to my FUSION ~ B

February 4th, 2017 09:17

Dark world.
willyweed said:

I see you have read the bad news
from front to back and cover to cover you drank to much and played the game of the loose and drunken lover welcome to the club
but even the most causal observer
will most certainly agree that~that is not the right for such a beautiful women such as thee ! so in the end if you need a real friend consider ww and just maybe we will really help one each to the other. choose friends wisely something you have failed to do in the pass if you don\'t care to hear me just say the word and will your wish your dream do come true and I will no longer talk with you but if you will dare I will take much care for I know your state is fragile . I will say no more now I\'ll head for door and wish sweet dreams 4U. ww please in your good time send me a sign.

February 2nd, 2017 03:58

Seeds of the soul influenced by ego.
willyweed said:

I see you are a competitor very nice work

January 31st, 2017 23:05

Dark world.
Shakerite said:

Lara . I\'m glad you escaped the jungle and joined the land of the free .
Saw the poignancy of your message .

January 27th, 2017 23:43

Imagination *_*
evangelist3 said:

That was beautiful

January 23rd, 2017 19:34

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