Comments received on poems by CaitEva
Death And Transformation
Francesco said:
Haven\'t been on here in a while. This is so nice! Are you active on \"All Poetry\" as well?
January 6th, 2023 09:49
Francesco said:
Haven\'t been on here in a while. This is so nice! Are you active on \"All Poetry\" as well?
January 6th, 2023 09:49
I am a woman, I am the darkness.
Blackhawkwings said:
Wow! Excellency in its rarest and beautiful form. Love your Poem!
December 11th, 2020 18:09
Blackhawkwings said:
Wow! Excellency in its rarest and beautiful form. Love your Poem!
December 11th, 2020 18:09
I am a woman, I am the darkness.
L. B. Mek said:
\'I am all that you fear
When I should be held dear
I am a woman\'
a powerful statement, written with such conviction, reminds me of:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-1185
December 11th, 2020 04:25
L. B. Mek said:
\'I am all that you fear
When I should be held dear
I am a woman\'
a powerful statement, written with such conviction, reminds me of:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-1185
December 11th, 2020 04:25
I am a woman, I am the darkness.
Doggerel Dave said:
Like to tell about the divine feminine? I love women (not all, of course, I know my limitations - and theirs, some of them!). I consider myself a feminist and/or supporter - anything you could tell or refer me to which would add to the picture?
I enjoyed the flow and imagery in your poem, BTW.
Regards Dave
December 10th, 2020 19:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Like to tell about the divine feminine? I love women (not all, of course, I know my limitations - and theirs, some of them!). I consider myself a feminist and/or supporter - anything you could tell or refer me to which would add to the picture?
I enjoyed the flow and imagery in your poem, BTW.
Regards Dave
December 10th, 2020 19:10
I am a woman, I am the darkness.
Shearonder1987 said:
Great poetry, I loved it.
December 10th, 2020 15:27
Shearonder1987 said:
Great poetry, I loved it.
December 10th, 2020 15:27
I am a woman, I am the darkness.
peto said:
Medusa? Is that her with snakes as hair?
Look at her and turn to stone.
Felt this was written by someone very confident
Enjoyed
December 10th, 2020 12:38
peto said:
Medusa? Is that her with snakes as hair?
Look at her and turn to stone.
Felt this was written by someone very confident
Enjoyed
December 10th, 2020 12:38
Insecurities fucked it. (shadow work)
Syd said:
Insecurity is a bitch. It can certainly hold you back in life. Written from the heart. I hope you\'re healing well.
Take care - Syd
August 27th, 2020 06:51
Syd said:
Insecurity is a bitch. It can certainly hold you back in life. Written from the heart. I hope you\'re healing well.
Take care - Syd
August 27th, 2020 06:51
You are the sacrifice 𓆗
jarcher54 said:
Your experimenting with the complex imagery of the snake, sacrifice, transformation, and knowledge is thought-provoking. You bring to mind a multitude of themes, from the serpent in the garden, Aesop\'s fable of the serpent, to Indian snake charmers and modern snake healers. The final line is like the victory of reason and liberation from the shackles of dead traditions: \"Physical sacrifice - there will be none.\"
August 16th, 2020 00:28
jarcher54 said:
Your experimenting with the complex imagery of the snake, sacrifice, transformation, and knowledge is thought-provoking. You bring to mind a multitude of themes, from the serpent in the garden, Aesop\'s fable of the serpent, to Indian snake charmers and modern snake healers. The final line is like the victory of reason and liberation from the shackles of dead traditions: \"Physical sacrifice - there will be none.\"
August 16th, 2020 00:28
You are the sacrifice 𓆗
dusk arising said:
It seems the christian churches are demanding of one sacrifice. That you sacrifice your intelligent questioning mind and accept the stories and wisdom of the world when the churches insisted the world was flat and the sun revolved around the earth.
Fortunately such sacrifices can be reversed if the childhood infection of FEAR of god can be overcome.
July 2nd, 2020 05:06
dusk arising said:
It seems the christian churches are demanding of one sacrifice. That you sacrifice your intelligent questioning mind and accept the stories and wisdom of the world when the churches insisted the world was flat and the sun revolved around the earth.
Fortunately such sacrifices can be reversed if the childhood infection of FEAR of god can be overcome.
July 2nd, 2020 05:06
You are the sacrifice 𓆗
orchidee said:
Someone said New Age teachings are Old Age teachings by now! Doh! I don\'t follow them - too spooky and strange.
July 2nd, 2020 02:02
orchidee said:
Someone said New Age teachings are Old Age teachings by now! Doh! I don\'t follow them - too spooky and strange.
July 2nd, 2020 02:02
Sugar daddy
FredPeyer said:
Laralove, your poem lays the truth right into the open. I like how it flows with an actually unexpected ending, which is also a new beginning. Very nice!
August 3rd, 2017 21:41
FredPeyer said:
Laralove, your poem lays the truth right into the open. I like how it flows with an actually unexpected ending, which is also a new beginning. Very nice!
August 3rd, 2017 21:41
Part alienated, part connected.
onepauly said:
I don\'t know what I was thinking. sorry
July 19th, 2017 22:23
onepauly said:
I don\'t know what I was thinking. sorry
July 19th, 2017 22:23
Part alienated, part connected.
Louis Gibbs said:
A very deep and philosophical poem, laralove! Tremendous insights portrayed and revealed. Congratulations on this amazing piece!
July 19th, 2017 21:26
Louis Gibbs said:
A very deep and philosophical poem, laralove! Tremendous insights portrayed and revealed. Congratulations on this amazing piece!
July 19th, 2017 21:26
Part alienated, part connected.
Gary Edward Geraci said:
This poem aims for truth; the Great story of Creation; Genesis. Nice visual imagery conjured up in your writing.
July 19th, 2017 20:21
Gary Edward Geraci said:
This poem aims for truth; the Great story of Creation; Genesis. Nice visual imagery conjured up in your writing.
July 19th, 2017 20:21
An individual in a collective sea.
Louis Gibbs said:
I admire the depth expressed in this poem. Excellent, thoughtful piece, laralove!
July 18th, 2017 22:25
Louis Gibbs said:
I admire the depth expressed in this poem. Excellent, thoughtful piece, laralove!
July 18th, 2017 22:25
We\'re all under a spell.
Q said:
Excellent usage of occult! When we open our eyes, and truly see, the connection to the world around us becomes obvious. We are destroying ourselves by severing our connections with nature.
July 18th, 2017 17:49
Q said:
Excellent usage of occult! When we open our eyes, and truly see, the connection to the world around us becomes obvious. We are destroying ourselves by severing our connections with nature.
July 18th, 2017 17:49
An individual in a collective sea.
Q said:
well done! This has a depth to it that opens the mind.
July 18th, 2017 17:45
Q said:
well done! This has a depth to it that opens the mind.
July 18th, 2017 17:45
We\'re all under a spell.
Poetic Dan said:
.... And the comment to follow up.
Artless art\" is an artistic process within the artist; it\'s meaning is \"art of the soul.\" - Bruce Lee.
July 18th, 2017 17:08
Poetic Dan said:
.... And the comment to follow up.
Artless art\" is an artistic process within the artist; it\'s meaning is \"art of the soul.\" - Bruce Lee.
July 18th, 2017 17:08
Authenticity dead no knowledge of self.
Poetic Dan said:
Ooooo you are good! Pen warrior indeed, will write poetry wiser than the enemy will ever be.
Carry on being you!
July 18th, 2017 17:04
Poetic Dan said:
Ooooo you are good! Pen warrior indeed, will write poetry wiser than the enemy will ever be.
Carry on being you!
July 18th, 2017 17:04
Part of an infinite mind chain
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, that\'s so good after reading the last one....I\'m nearly speechless but I\'m holding my tongue and I\'ll just read on
July 18th, 2017 17:00
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, that\'s so good after reading the last one....I\'m nearly speechless but I\'m holding my tongue and I\'ll just read on
July 18th, 2017 17:00
An individual in a collective sea.
Poetic Dan said:
This sings with every word
The feeling of connection
So beautifully done
You\'ve answered my thoughts
Without knowing the question
What truth is in the rest of your work
I hope to see more after this treasure
July 18th, 2017 16:55
Poetic Dan said:
This sings with every word
The feeling of connection
So beautifully done
You\'ve answered my thoughts
Without knowing the question
What truth is in the rest of your work
I hope to see more after this treasure
July 18th, 2017 16:55
An individual in a collective sea.
onepauly said:
together we stand and stand again. great work!
July 18th, 2017 16:38
onepauly said:
together we stand and stand again. great work!
July 18th, 2017 16:38
Authenticity dead no knowledge of self.
Louis Gibbs said:
I\'m not sure even esoteric knowledge is a way out of what we have created, assuming a way out is needed. I like your poem, laralove.
May 29th, 2017 18:43
Louis Gibbs said:
I\'m not sure even esoteric knowledge is a way out of what we have created, assuming a way out is needed. I like your poem, laralove.
May 29th, 2017 18:43
Authenticity dead no knowledge of self.
swingline said:
We all are slaves to one of two masters . One is Heavenly and the other is matter . One is forever the other will our ashes scatter .
May 29th, 2017 16:51
swingline said:
We all are slaves to one of two masters . One is Heavenly and the other is matter . One is forever the other will our ashes scatter .
May 29th, 2017 16:51
We\'re all under a spell.
swingline said:
I\'m doubtful of the direction that the occult offers .
May 24th, 2017 12:08
swingline said:
I\'m doubtful of the direction that the occult offers .
May 24th, 2017 12:08
Run and you\'ll get burned.
Francesco said:
I can relate to the struggle with unpleasant, obsessive thoughts.
It really seems impossible to run from them, much like a little demon that cannot be ignored! :) (I invite you to read my poem \"The Demon\", you might enjoy it).
Excellent write! :) x
February 14th, 2017 09:58
Francesco said:
I can relate to the struggle with unpleasant, obsessive thoughts.
It really seems impossible to run from them, much like a little demon that cannot be ignored! :) (I invite you to read my poem \"The Demon\", you might enjoy it).
Excellent write! :) x
February 14th, 2017 09:58
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